Well, congratulations . This is by far you best novel... I mean, all others was horrendous,honestly . Grammar, characters ,forced moments and cringy stuff - yeah ,everything become better...with one exception, plotline. Because this is very boring. You just copy pasted how you play titan quest ? Are you serious? With so much potential in powers/magic ,with so much potential in lore and interesting changes that could be made. You just literally narrated how you play a game...my God. Well. At least you still copy pasting original plot like in all you others novels. - is it like some sort of tradition or you just unimaginative? Conclusion. Do you truly want to read how someone played a game? Even if you doesn't know about titan quest , story itself written from game character perspective ,means more about gameplay then story line or character interaction. Which is make for very bland story.
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I understand you, I didn't sleep well, and normally I wouldn't get sleepy while reading, but this is so boring ... I really don't know why I'm pushing myself. I guess to wait for the next saga or what he will do when the game ends ... I really don't know. Hope One puch man isn't boring.
... Well, you going to suffer, a lot. Because after opm, there would be yugi-oh and that even more boring.
Darwin111111:I understand you, I didn't sleep well, and normally I wouldn't get sleepy while reading, but this is so boring ... I really don't know why I'm pushing myself. I guess to wait for the next saga or what he will do when the game ends ... I really don't know. Hope One puch man isn't boring.
I like yugioh ... the game ... and maybe the first season. If they put out a lot of anime stuff ... well, I'll honestly leave this novel ... I mean, expressions. Writing anime expressions even when you go in an anime does not always come out very well because they are different media. I tend to stay away from those types of novels because I feel that the character who makes those expressions is abnormal.
Yuri_is_Ntr:... Well, you going to suffer, a lot. Because after opm, there would be yugi-oh and that even more boring.
God ... he already got the typical deus ex machina out of the chat groups that go to anime. They literally read or watch an entire series in seconds, with no explanation of how they accomplished that. It would be more enjoyable and it would feel more important if they made us feel the passage of time and the ignorance that the groups would have in missions for not finishing reading it. (Besides that it could be stolen in the X world, which would make the people of that world know the future or important things)
Yuri_is_Ntr:... Well, you going to suffer, a lot. Because after opm, there would be yugi-oh and that even more boring.
