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I mean not to exaggerate but this novel is amazingly good especially the plot i like it alot this has potential to go on the rankings.but keep up the good work. also ive been reading all your novel and i have suggestion cause of your novel style if whenever you have the time or when you finish your other novels can u please try to make a shinmai no testament and i know u would make it fire and interesting but thats all thx stay safe

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Boring

Well, congratulations . This is by far you best novel... I mean, all others was horrendous,honestly . Grammar, characters ,forced moments and cringy stuff - yeah ,everything become better...with one exception, plotline. Because this is very boring. You just copy pasted how you play titan quest ? Are you serious? With so much potential in powers/magic ,with so much potential in lore and interesting changes that could be made. You just literally narrated how you play a game...my God. Well. At least you still copy pasting original plot like in all you others novels. - is it like some sort of tradition or you just unimaginative? Conclusion. Do you truly want to read how someone played a game? Even if you doesn't know about titan quest , story itself written from game character perspective ,means more about gameplay then story line or character interaction. Which is make for very bland story.

It's boring. Even when I read all about Titan, he killed every opportunity he was giving him when he entered the group. Literally everything was fuzzy (It would have been appreciated if I mentioned the anime, manga or game of the people in the group), not to mention what made me really leave reading this fanfic, the Deus ex machina of sending a manga to the group, which is the manga of the world in which they will go, and everyone can, without any explanation, read it instantly, without time passing. They just did it, they felt, and time didn't pass, as if they all had a hyper speed that they obviously don't have to read so fast. In conclusion, this novel is tedious and boring. It literally tells you a game, of how he is playing it. The only different things are the companions and a little the conversations, but there is nothing very worth mentioning, because the rest is the same.

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