Truth be told that was the whole point however I can see how unsatisfying it is for it to take so long so I completely get you.

You know. I completely understand this and have come to a decision. I made a lot of mistakes since this is my first story and I’d very much like to correct them. So I will be creating a new story with a different protagonist but the same concepts such as the king Cadidates and what not as even I’m frustrated with my horrible pacing problems. I hope you can at least try that one once it comes out and I very much thank you for voicing your criticism as it really does do a lot to help. I’m very sorry about this. (Truth is I had already noticed the bad pacing but since I didn’t get any comments criticizing it I sort of gas lit myself into thinking it was mostly in my head due to my constant second guessing of my actions.)

Though I mostly did that since I really wanted what happens during the “Auction Confrontation Arc” to hit as HARD as possible.

I keep emphasizing it because it’s a huge flaw that she indeed is not doing anything about… flaws like this are crippling and we’re right about to reach the arc where all of her flaws that she seems to refuse to work on are going to come back to bite her and those around her. Her unwillingness to put her all into training. Her willing ignorance at what the other king candidates are planning. Her lack of impulse control. Her constantly running away from thinking about the future. And even her arrogance. We’re like RIGHT THERE. The fall from grace, the true start of the hero’s journey. The call to action. Her weaknesses are only piling up more and more and yet she’s still for the most part Ignoring it. Luck can’t save her forever. Though I understand if you still want to drop the story, I myself have realized that I’m foreshadowing a lot of stuff far too much and if I could go back I’d definitely try cutting ALOT of the fluff since I could do those characterizations and focused stories during canon.

Indeed she hasn’t gotten much better since chapter one. She’ll start improving once she stops hesitating when it comes to thinking about the future. Which is to say…. When she’s properly forced too…

That’s a good thought though falling doesn’t work exactly like that in this story, it is still a bit strange that she can act like that…

Hmm? I have never been one to confirm nor deny anything~

I’m sorry friend…

That... is almost as shiny as Krillin's head.

I'll be her all day. Thank you~

His master is a real BEAST of a woman!

Anyone remember this show?

That’s a good question… though each of their heritages are important spoilers. Just know that only Cebrail is what you would really call “all natural”

Biological at first

Kokabiel is one of the leaders of Grigory and one of the first Fallen Angels meaning that he likely participated in the war against God and the Devils. You’re saying a kid that has likely barely lived for 18 years should be able to beat him based on who he’s related to alone? The combat experience and the amount of skills they each have at their disposal should be night and day in my opinion is all I’m saying.

I know that but you must realize he lost to BASE VALI no juggernaut drive and if my memory serves me no dividing of his power. He was still beaten immensely easily by a devil who should be weak to his arsenal and hasn’t even begun to approach the higher levels of power in the verse. You gotta admit that it makes both Angels and Fallen Angels look pretty bad power scaling wise…

Didn’t want to respond since I really am wasting Data (Check Chapter 55’s author notes if you think that for some reason I’m running away… from a conversation… over the… uhh internet…) But to my knowledge after doing just minuscule amount of research and cross referencing… Devils killed his parents and he even seems to hold actual animosity towards them given that he claims that he can’t forgive them, since… they killed his parents. Also I guess shame on me for not reading 19 volumes of a light novel and memorizing every single character I guess…

I feel as though I have explained myself perfectly. I think perhaps that you just aren't understanding or you're simply not trying to understand. Unfortunately, while I'd like to continue this conversation I have no Internet at the moment and am using up data so I need to go. Have a nice day.

What do you mean?

God's System and the Sacred Gear System? Yes of course.