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    Primas14h
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    +1

    Or concubine harem:
    a grand journey: starting with wishes
    Anime und Comics · holt_kessho
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    Primas2d
    Antwortet auf Primas

    not fully but still

    Slave Harem Rise : My Awesome Dungeon Life
    Fantasie · WangJing
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  • Primas
    Primas2d
    Antwortet auf Milenko

    I know the story

    Slave Harem Rise : My Awesome Dungeon Life
    Fantasie · WangJing
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    Primas3d
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    that many things any only got f****** kiss

    When he opened his eyes in panic, he was met with the pink irises of Kyouka Uzen, the chief of the seventh MDF unit, who was kissing him on the lips while sitting in his lap - if that was not already evident.
    Mato Seihei no Slave: House Husband Unchained
    Anime und Comics · John_Doe_777
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    Primas4d
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    yes

    want a sequel?
    I'm reborn as Rudeus Greyrat
    Anime und Comics · FanFictionForge
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    Primas4d
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    idiotic to show the woman your pig

    It's so idiot to show this kind of pig expression to girl's and women's.
    My Happy Life In Another World
    Fantasie · Parshant_Morwal
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    Primas5d
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    no

    [2. No, definitely not]
    Doraemon: Degenerate Nobita
    Anime und Comics · DepravedLord
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    Primas5d
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    charts

    'no..he was improving mid battle...this...Naruto's talent is way off that chards!!' shikamaru thought deep
    Reincarnated as Naruto with A gamer System
    Anime und Comics · gaming_saff
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    Primas5d
    Antwortet auf Primas

    it not i

    "That's the skill of the greatest ninja believe it!" Naruto said as ino made a ugly face"yeah sure"
    Reincarnated as Naruto with A gamer System
    Anime und Comics · gaming_saff
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    Primas5d
    Antwortet auf Taro

    it was fine has before please, please do nooooot translate i

    "That's the skill of the greatest ninja believe it!" Naruto said as ino made a ugly face"yeah sure"
    Reincarnated as Naruto with A gamer System
    Anime und Comics · gaming_saff
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    Primas5d
    Antwortet auf Himank_Gosain

    do you even need to say anything

    "WOW!!! NARUTO-KUN HAS BECOME HOT..HES SO HANDSOME....MORE HANDSOME THEN SASUKE-KUN!" girls yelled in union as they get a cold stare from hinata as Naruto walked towards hinata and said"can I sit here"
    Reincarnated as Naruto with A gamer System
    Anime und Comics · gaming_saff
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    Primas5d
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    maximum first wants to go the story the way it is going so don't stop writing a story even though it is taking too much time but we are not against it because every good story needs time

    Ch 10 Future Paths
    Moving Forward - A Powerful HP Fic
    Bücher und Literatur · Vedros
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    Primas6d
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    thanks for the story of yours because it is interesting it is in the same old way many of the authors have been writing the story but if you completed or try to complete it in a good way I am not even joking, lots and lots of peoples are going to read your story if you do not leave the story in the middle

    Ch 14 Chapter 13: Hella joins the game
    a grand journey: starting with wishes
    Anime und Comics · holt_kessho
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    Primas6d
    Antwortet auf Ciya_Ciya

    he is leaving the Chinese people story behind with this right and because this f****** story will make your brain damage

    Naruto: Pokemon Card System
    Anime und Comics · VoidRuler9
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    Primas6d
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    now the stories becoming interesting I'm not saying that this why was not interesting before but the part of this where it is going I like it let's see what happens next in the story

    Ch 7 Chapter 7
    Harry's Multiversal Journey
    Bücher und Literatur · SenseiCaffeine
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    Primas7d
    Verschickt

    if you are trying to copy somebody else is work change as many things as you can because if you are adding your countries style or any other countries style with the name on it you are looking like a fool because maximum of the words in the story is based on Chinese stories where they get power from nothing and then became something beyond the mortals comprehension and then they forget the top the UN got their power they drive don't even try to forget the top the UN got their power they drive don't even think about how do they got their system

    Gain A Power Every 168 Hours
    Urban · Death_Note_2000
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    Primas7d
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    what the f*** is he talking about in this line , what is b–car

    "You bastard, why didn't you kill you bastard? Driving a B-car is amazing, isn't it, ah? Deliberately splashing dirty water from the roadside on my son?"
    Gain A Power Every 168 Hours
    Urban · Death_Note_2000
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    Primas7d
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    it's speeding not to walking for a car

    "Everyone really has it now." Priya said angrily as he looked at the Lamborghini, who was walking away.
    Gain A Power Every 168 Hours
    Urban · Death_Note_2000
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    Primas7d
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    oh you gender has changed from man to a woman and he is the little sister himself

    "Aren't you talking nonsense, of course?" Aryan looked at Priya seriously. After all, Aryan is now a stupid sister, and they depend on each other.
    Gain A Power Every 168 Hours
    Urban · Death_Note_2000
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    Primas7d
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    I think you should forgot your story because everything I'll think in the story is Chinese based I don't have a problem with their story the problem is if you are trying to copy somebody else work or translating that work to make it your own change the things which maximum people will not like here making this story from Indian perspective than change the chopsticks to spoon and don't use the Chinese peoples name and their don't understand what they are you talking about

    "Hey, just kidding." Aryan sneered, opened the Coke, picked up his chopsticks, and started to eat breakfast.
    Gain A Power Every 168 Hours
    Urban · Death_Note_2000
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