Human_Twig

I really love the way this has been set up. It feels like I'm in for a crazy journey with Elias into this mysterious world. For a first work, I'm incredibly impressed, especially with how much planning has gone into this. If you ever need something to cure your LOTM addiction, this is it. Def a page turner!

My goodness, what a great "first" chapter. Apart from your MC Elias having the same as mine which pulls me out of it a little, it's got a great intro to the world, the characters and the system already in only one chapter and that really hooks me. THATS ACTUALLY CRAZY! Imma binge the rest another day but I'm highly interested in where this will go as I've been following your writing process on Discord too. Keep it up [img=recommend]

Shameless Plug. This is my first novel so I'm still getting better. For those reading, I hope you enjoy and I'm always open to feedback.

This story really shows promise, although it has generic tropes, it's well done, it's got great visual storytelling, the characters have great dialogue and are interesting too. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds. Keep it up author 🙌

What a good start. I've only read a few chapters but how the novel introduces the character is great and really characterizes him. Although the massive explanation in chapter 3 broke my immersion, it was rather interesting. I would work on your punctuation and fix a few grammatical errors but overall solid, and I can't wait to read more.

I love the pacing and characterisation in this novel, also the mystery and history behind the tickets, mother and where Ulanni is really keeping me invested. This web novel looks like it'll do great if you keep up the great work!!

I'm not a big zombie fan so with these kinds of stories they would have to be different to the norm. This one is pretty simple and really fast-paced. The chapters are very short so it's a very quick read, but I personally think it's a bit too fast. I hope you continue though because the more you write, the better it will get. Keep it up!

Yeah, I'm very hooked. The mystery, the fascinating world and the vibrant personalities of each character really draw me in. The prologue even almost got me tearing up from its tragic nature. I love what you've set up and I can't wait to learn more about these 'Numbered' and the precious Autumn.

OMG, that first sequence had me in the feels, gave me goosebumps and almost made me tear up. So dark and really draws me into the frame of mind of 'Autumn'.

So he absorbed his other selves soul, or spirit. Like the way he fought seeing as he's literally fighting... himself lol.