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THE POISON DEITY

Autor: B_DRAG
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Lesen Sie den Roman THE POISON DEITY des Autors B_DRAG, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.NOTICE__ This novel is currently on hold due to inadequate planning and numerous errors.The novel will be reworked in the future with a new title, revised character names, and numerous other changes.I...

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NOTICE__ This novel is currently on hold due to inadequate planning and numerous errors. The novel will be reworked in the future with a new title, revised character names, and numerous other changes. I will inform you all when I decide to resume writing, possibly in two months' time. Read my new book_ Assassin System: Rise of a nobody (I promise you won't be disappointed)

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INDIGO

[REAL STORY] [KISAH NYATA] 1. Jikalau kamu merasa tidak memiliki kepercayaan akan hal diluar akal manusia maka jangan baca buku ini. 2. Karena buku ini berisi tentang ceritaku, yang tidak masuk akal. 3.Tapi Jika kamu merasa ingin tahu maka bacalah. 4. Aku tidak akan melarangmu untuk berkomentar atau tidak. Itu hak asasi kamu. 5. Pesanku untukmu. Mereka yang tidak terlihat, tidak seperti yang kalian bayangkan. 6. Takutlah pada dirimu sendiri. =============== Hmmm bisa di bilang aku sama seperti yang dimaksud. Aku bisa melihat mereka, aku bisa berkomunikasi dengan mereka, aku bisa melihat masa depan seseorang, aku bisa melihat masalalunya dan apa perasaannya sekarang. Dan aku bisa melihat kejujuran sesorang. Mungkin jikalau kalian merasa enak menjadi diriku. Kalian salah. #Indigo #Indrake6 #horor #Real #Ceritanyata #Supranatural -------------------------------- Ejh (Nama Samaran) adalah Anak normal pada umumnya, tetapi sebuah kejadian yang sangat tidak dia inginkan menghampiri kehidupannya. Setelah dia tahu bahwa dia adalah keturunan dari INDIGO, dia menjadi resah dan tidak bisa menerimanya, berbagai cara dia lakukan agar dia bisa menjadi normal kembali. Dan melihat mereka yang tak kasat mata sudah menjadi makanan sehari-hari untuknya. Berbagai macam kendala dia dapatkan mulai dari gangguan dari makhluk yang tidak terlihat hingga Mati Suri pun pernah dia alami. Cuma satu kuncinya, bersyukur dan menerima sebuah karunia yang sudah dia dapatkan adalah kunci untuk mengontrol semuanya. (REAL STORY) --------------------------------- Di Dalam kisah ini semua yang terjadi adalah nyata (Tergantung Dari Kepercayaan Si Pembaca, Percaya Atau Tidak Itu Masalah Si Pembaca) dan ada memang beberapa kejadian yang di lebih minimalisir di ceritakan karena kejadiannya yang memang terlalu tidak masuk akal. Semua tokoh dan nama adalah asli, terkecuali beberapa nama yang disamarkan karena permintaan dari pihaknya sendiri. Dan nama tempat yang ada adalah asli terkecuali beberapa tempat yang memang tidak bisa di sebutkan namanya. Semua Kejadian berdasarkan Pengalaman Si Penulis. Kisahnya yang di mulai dari SMP sampai Sekarang Ini. --------------------------------- Copyright 2019 : 1996Tama

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Blissful_ChaotiC
Blissful_ChaotiCLv11Blissful_ChaotiC

So far I've read the first 6 chapters and my review will be based on that. The author first of all is decently skilled - the writing is very clear with little to no grammatical errors and the transitions are super well done!! The story itself has captivated me by this point as my questions begin to mount and I crave answers! I'm totally here for Zhong Peng's journey :) Keep up the good work!

RoxanaWordsmith
RoxanaWordsmithLv4RoxanaWordsmith

After reading the starting chapters I can say The Poison Deity is a captivating novel that immerses readers in a world of mystery and cultivation. The story follows Zhong Peng on a dangerous journey filled with unexpected revelations. With vivid descriptions, a well-paced narrative, and the introduction of an ancient book and cultivation system, it adds depth and intrigue to the plot. The compelling characters and enticing storyline promise an exciting and immersive reading experience. I can't wait to continue reading The Poison Deity and discover more about its captivating world and intriguing mysteries.

Laurian_Avrigeanu
Laurian_AvrigeanuLv1Laurian_Avrigeanu

So, I've read the first 8 or so chapters. And I have to say one thing, excellent work. I can feel it, I can smell it, I can see it. My only nitpick is that you sometimes use words that have to be searched in a dictionary, other than that, congratulations, I know how hard it is to keep this type of writing up.

GifflarGod
GifflarGodLv14GifflarGod

Writing quality is worse than mtl novels.. I just read 2 chapters and dropped.. I'll continue if and when this has been rewritten.

Tripple1ZRO
Tripple1ZROLv15Tripple1ZRO

Interesting story thus far. I would appreciate if the author can improve some grammar and small things, like having names capitalized when used. Other than that, the novel has good potential. Good luck!

JA_Chrysant
JA_ChrysantLv2JA_Chrysant

It is a cultivation story with intricate plot and intriguing story. You won't waste your time reading this because it's immediately grip you at the start. Please, keep up the good work, Author!

THE_GOAT_HIMSELF
THE_GOAT_HIMSELFLv3THE_GOAT_HIMSELF

from reading this story I can tell how much you put into this novel and the more I read the more I want more please continue writing

DimitriusJones
DimitriusJonesLv3DimitriusJones

The author has clearly put a lot of thought into this story. I appreciate the attention to world building, mystery, and suspense. I don't normally read cultivation stories, but overall the writing leaves me wanting to know more about this world. I hope the author continues to update this story.

MudPie_404
MudPie_404Lv1MudPie_404

This review is based on the first three chapters as I believe these three are the "make or break" of any story. WRITING QUALITY: The grammar is okay. It was easy to understand but there were some random "deep words" here and there. The paragraph were also kinda long to my liking. I have the attention span of a goldfish that's why. PS. Your dialogue could be better. STABILITY OF UPDATES: Quite consistent, I guess. I checked the table of contents and found out the author started uploading six months ago. Sixty chapters in and three days continuous writing. STORY DEVELOPMENT: [spoilers] A lot have happened during the first three chaps. Some burly dude tryna bully him, he found a peculiar box, picked it up, it turned into a book after it drank some of his blood, then viola, transmigration. The pace was alright in my opinion. CHARACTER DESIGN: Could definitely do some work to be honest. WORLD BACKGROUND: Not much was told.

PEARL_WANG
PEARL_WANGLv11PEARL_WANG

The concept is overall nice, but there are problems with typos and grammars here and there, the writer is extremely hardworking, because the writing style is very very very great. You travel inside the novel with just few lines, enough to get hooked.

CrimsonHelix
CrimsonHelixLv12CrimsonHelix

The story itself has the potential to be great! The only problem with it is the inconsistent updates and the writing quality.[img=recommend]

Perfect_praize
Perfect_praizeLv3Perfect_praize

The author is really good, I don’t like reading cultivation books but I stick to this one

Rainandstorm
RainandstormLv2Rainandstorm

Alright, this is just mind blowing, to be honest, at first when I saw it was a cultivation novel, I was like having doubts about how it would turn out to be... But men, I can believe I would actually love something like this, I mean, c'mon this book is literally amazing, I love the fact that the chapters are many, it would make it a lot easier to dive deeper into the story... I really do can't wait to binge reading this... I love the suspense and the characters are really simply relatable .. overall, this book is simply awesome 👌👌

novarayne
novarayneLv12novarayne

I'm not into cultivations novels because sometimes they overcomplicated stuff, but this was it was easy to read and with a really good plot. Some typos here and there, but it did not hinder the writing quality. Good job, author!!! Keep up the work 👍💕💕

JA_Chrysant
JA_ChrysantLv2JA_Chrysant

The plot is intriguing. I'd like to read more when I have time. The weakest point so far is the MC, but it was just the beginning and his character has not yet developed. Keep up the good work, Author!

g_d
g_dLv13g_d

I've been reading this for a while now and I'd say it's a 10/10 for me. keep up the good work. author; this is a good story.

sleepingpeacefully
sleepingpeacefullyLv3sleepingpeacefully

Good novel and with good writing I Have read a few chapters of the novel and can already tell it is great and overall love it .

UNDEADxGEMINI
UNDEADxGEMINILv1UNDEADxGEMINI

read the first few chapters and I can say its a pretty interesting book that i'll be adding to my reading list for later on. Personally, I read a lot and so prefer books with longer chapters so i would have more to read but short chapters are also good when done right

Slayer0
Slayer0Lv3Slayer0

There is a good plot, good characters, and a mystery that has me keep going. The dialogue and the writing quality are also perfect. Overall love it.

skylit3r
skylit3rLv11skylit3r

I'm loving this novel! I've already blitzed through 10 chapters. The story starts strong and keeps you guessing. There are loads of unanswered questions, but that's part of the mysterious vibe, you know? Chapter 3 was like a cultivation cheat code or something, but hey, no biggie. Grammar took a nosedive from chapters 6 to 10. Not sure if it gets better later. It's not the worst, but there are spelling issues, missing punctuation (commas, periods, capital letters), and repeated words. Still readable, though. Will finish the book for sure. Hoping the author cleans up those chapters. I'll come back and edit this review, promise. I kinda wanted more details on how the MC resolved conflicts before jetting off on their world tour, but whatever. And seriously, more world-building would be cool. This is just my first take on the book. If it gets better, I'll update. Just wanted to give the author some feedback 'cause I'm really into the story. Oh, and by the way, there's a system in the mix. Definitely worth a read, especially if you dig cultivation, systems, and a weak-to-strong MC.

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