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your over estimating him he didn't "wage wars" he fought in them he was strong yes but stronger than guy is a bit of an overestimation or u underestimating guy
your thinking of him as if he isn't human your telling me when u knew exams that would pretty much decide your life were in a year u were panicking and studying a ton? no u enjoyed life like he's trying to now
right because u would watch your dad die from a monstrous demon fox that traumatised you and you wouldn't feel uncomfortable getting close with the person who literally has it inside him?
but I don't think you understand a person who goes through trauma doesn't immediately recover say what you will but he is going through so much trauma people don't just automatically go "oh yeah I have to work harder" when a giant fox has murdered their dad in front of them and the image is literally burned into their memories he is traumatised and acts like a real person does you want a machine but this mc is merely human
would also like to say to everyone hating on the mc. the appeal u aren't getting here is that he isn't like most op mcs where they work hard and get insane results, but he is human he is trying to enjoy his life with his family he is growing steadily and rather than a machine he's more human just because your used to op mc's who are non stop working and only take a break once a few months, that's not human behaviour u may think in that situation u could do what your saying but the reality is this isn't some guy with indomitable will this is a man who lived through trauma and merely has fragments of his past lives. He is human he only wants to protect his family and he has trauma and his childhood which builds him to where he is his character was built perfectly you just want a person who is perfect but that's not real and this author shows he knows this
I think you missed the good points of this fanfic because the appeal isn't that he solves everything and is super strong, it's that he acts realistic and rather than it feeling like everything revolves around the mc he is a part of it. He isn't perfect either he has faults but he tries his best and he is still strong yet it also shows how even with how strong he is he isn't almighty he doesn't feel like some unreachable god he is a person who just wants to protect his family
This story is honestly amazing overall, but the main things I'd put that stand out are The way emotions are described: Normally in fanfics either u have to put yourself in the position of the character to understand then or it just feels like they're detached but the descriptions of trauma, fear, concern everything they were incredible I would honestly call this a masterpiece of I could give it a rating its deffo a 10/5 The story and character progression: I have to say usually story's feel quite rushed until you get to the main goal of the protagonist, but here, rather than just using timeskips, this author uses the other characters and uses it to world build you don't feel like the world revolves around the main character he actually feels like a part of it it's super realistic.
MASS RELEASE AFTER A BREAK LETS GOOO
honestly why I like dragon ball it's always been my favourite cause its not about being the best but facing your limits and finding ways to surpass em
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in terms of all the universe they were quite a bit above average including ozaru
true tho
First explanation not from Canon that somewhat makes sense
that is what happened tho they were just stronger than most and anything that was stronger than them was either mot stronger than ozaru or god like in strength
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orochimaru is dead ye?
I think he should definitely get a pass for that master piece of describing emotions as the kyubi attack happened and passed it was a downright masterpiece