MC is powerful but dumb. It feels like a kid with a rocket laucher who feel safe thinking he can blowup anyone who try to harm him but doesnt even know how to turn off the safety lock. My point is mc is so dumb he literally drank the will of fire koolaid and fail to protect his own clan even with so much time and personal growth he had during that time. Cant fix the stupid i guess. +2 stars for wiritng quality. -3 for story setting, character design and development.
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MÖGENI think you missed the good points of this fanfic because the appeal isn't that he solves everything and is super strong, it's that he acts realistic and rather than it feeling like everything revolves around the mc he is a part of it. He isn't perfect either he has faults but he tries his best and he is still strong yet it also shows how even with how strong he is he isn't almighty he doesn't feel like some unreachable god he is a person who just wants to protect his family