Just remember that an archer who can’t do close combat is not a good archer.

Overall the writing quality is good but personally if possible I would like the not mentioning rape and crippling of main character and support. Anyway the story is great has a nice them and while their is some problems with update I hope you continue this series

I like that you have dragon slayer magic but come on just buy props to save Bell aunt. As well as the other power system is not compatible with danmachi since it makes it to complicated. Focus on one power system and if you want to add those Chinese power system make with attack direction or you can use moon world Odin ruins. Well with Chinese you have to simply it since it is to complicated and annoying.

More chapters please

Why did this have a big time skip. Bell is still haven ’t mett lily and them

It fine if you want to add other supernatural worlds but dont complete change already made work to make it work. fate, highschool dxd, justsu kaisen are fine since they are modern times

The only thing is that probably you have to make travel time more since you make tanjiro go different places in a day

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Great chapter just would like an image

Well everything is fine just switch the personality of instead of the orginal soul to the incantation of his concepts. Like this it will be simple change and eventually you can merge them if needed

Hey i am still in my teens so it is all right

This is nice but i would like a stat sheet. also great novel so far

What world is this

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