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The story is very good overall the only drop in quality are the parts in Orario, man are the Orario segments boring... except for the character development of the girls it feels like filler and that character development does not justify the hundreds upon hundreds of chapters spent in the Danmachi world. The segments with DxD are good, the very original segment about medusa was very good, the most recent segment in the Bleach world is good, the segments about the ExE are super good... But the segments in danmachi are just bad, it is not even danmachi fault, it is just that the danmachi world is not a very interesting world to have Kisuke in, the only interesting thing that happens is the characterization of some of the girls but they could have gotten that characterization in a place that was more interesting
technically he is soul fused with the hollow, it is like whe hollos eat hollows, all the douls that form them fuse. It is as if I higo "devoured" white(the hollow), so his hollow part is not external, he is just a werird menos were the dominant soul is a living plus.
I am, I finished writting chapter 10, which is the longest so far and possibly the last they are locked in hueco mundo yesterday, I sent it to my betareader/editor, and when he finishes I will publish it. As my chapters are kind of long and I do have a job that takes creativity I sometimes will not be able to post chapters in a long time, and sometimes I will post chapters quickly. For example, the first 7 chapters were written at a pace of 1 each day, the 8th chapter took me a week, the 9th chapter a month, and the 10th chapter has took me a bit more than a week. In general I will publish the next chapter which is like 4 chapters in one as soon as possible as it only needs to be revised right now.
Eh? I never intended to make fighting the main point, more than anything because I really hate fight scenes in written format, I always skip them when I read novels so I do not know how to write them
This is an AU, It is not a pure what if so I can add the lore that I want and ignore cannon as much as I like, In cannon bleach it may not work that way but in my story it does. In general hollow Ichigo stories are boring if you stick to cannon since Hollows are a tad unexplored so unless one is writting a story of Ichigo joining Aizen, one has to write an AU to make it interesting.