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I think this is an engaging story with well developed characters that I am interested in. A lot of funny moments. The relationships are solid and fleshed out. For the most part, I love this story. There are a couple of things that I find annoying. for example, there are some times when there is a perspective shift from the end of one chapter and the beginning of another which includes the last and first paragraph being almost identical. It's just a couple words that are different because it the same moment, just from another person. If you had a few days break between the chapters, it would be a good refresher, but if you are continuously reading, it's a little pointless. another is when something is said, and then there is a cute but cringe. It feels more like an author note than a character though. why not just blush and roll your eyes? Get the point across without actually saying cringe. especially since cringe is subjective. There are a few other small bits here and there that took me out of the story because it made me think if it made sense, but for the most part, it's an enjoyable read. I love the trio's friendship. Tannie is great character. I adore the ML. I like this enough that I would read it again.

I asked and they said they don't. you can only buy each chapter and download to read through the app. I was wondering if you sold the story as a whole like a PDF, Kindle book, E-PUB, etc.

I really enjoy what I have read so far. So much so that when it is finished, would you be selling it as a complete PDF?

I love this story. It has been added to my faves list and I have already made someone else read it. I actually would love to buy it as an ebook/printed book because I want to have a completed story to own completely.

If you stop at Chapter 342, you will be less annoyed than if you finish it. There are so many loose storylines, characters and events. for the first 1/2-2/3, I was enjoying it so much that I had suggested it to others to read and was sure this would be one I would reread multiple times. However.... It ends as if there is a vol 2 that you HAVE to read.

fleshed out and developed characters. simple but well developed world building. I adore the MC's family. They refer to her as the baby quite often. However, instead of being annoying or condescending, it has a cute and endearing quality. She has a follower that could use a bit more screen time and develops a nice little friendship with another girl. The development between the MC and the ML is well paced and makes sense with a bit of friends to lovers. The attitude the MC has about the "original leads" is to ignore them unless they are in her face and then swat them likes flies and move on. I enjoyed this as it is not often incorporated since face slapping tends to be a big draw. Crossover between the originals and the current MC and ML's doesn't happen often. at least so far during the first 110 chapters. It's got a slice of life feel and hasn't had any crazy ups and downs yet. However it hasn't been boring or slowly paced either. so far I am enjoying it and have already added it to my reread list and recommended it to someone.

The MC is a smart scientist who wanted an attractive child with the ML. However, she treats the now 6 year old as a servant and is incompetent in every matter aside from her work. I don't know how the child survived up until the point he could do things for himself since she can't cook, clean, or do anything aside from her job. The ML is a germaphobe with the typical scheming and unlikable fiancee. I got annoyed and even a cute and intelligent bun wasn't enough to keep me engaged in the story.

I enjoyed reading this and have added to my list of wait for updates and reread. The characters are interesting and there is lots of growth and development from multiple people. While the focus is on the main couple, the side characters are given moments to shine and showcase their own storylines so you don't get stuck with lots of filler or drawn out scenes while waiting for the next main character development.

I have enjoyed everything I read so far and am waiting for the next update. Strong and interesting characters. some funny moments, some cute ones. love the dynamics between the characters. This is added to my list of faves and rereads.

I got to chapter 30 before I couldn't read anymore. The ML has no redeeming qualities. none. The MC is ok... Even when this was one of the free reading books, I could not be bothered to keep reading or even check out the last couple chapters because I do not care what happens. There is nothing likable about these people.