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Urmmm… was this a crack fic the whole time?
I thought they had a sibling relationship? this came out of nowhere from the prior description
I'm not picking out the flaws in the story but when it's obvious like this, it's hard not to
So he applied with no known qualifications or renown?
Is his a Chinese translated novel? The waffleing is similar
Is this going to be one of those 'catch them all' (anything that has t*ts) fanfics? Just so I know what to expect
This class combination doesn’t make sense though, a guardian that’s a berserker as well?
It should be ‘his experience in life’, his school days were so far in the past at this point, referring to it here makes it seem as if the souls bonded was a young Tom and not the man he grew to be.
Might be a bit late to point this out but thunder is sound, lightning is electricity so yh