Decent, thank god its not a harem Decent, ive had enough of those. grammars alright, plot is interesting to say the least post more filler word

I can see your point and ill try and add more details and fix them but I don't recall the mc ever fighting an hyuuga. I wrote a scene with Alex using his Geass on a group of uchiha But only once. Maybe it's my style of writing that confused you but ill try and get better. Dialogue is weird for me but im trying to find a more natural flow to it but appreciate the criticism ill work on it

Alex has very limited knowledge of the naruto world which means he doesn't know every ability or kekkei genkei that exist nor it's potential. The only Uzumakis that we're shown was Kushina who died and Karin that was able to use the chain but not to it's full potential. So for all that alex knows they were the only people who showed any potential. Now if we're talking about me personally I don't want to write about that for right now. you can say that Alex is underestimating the Uzumaki kinda like how not every uchiha has unlocked the ms. And not every uzumaki even has the potential to use the chains

Exactly the Uzumaki clan were destroyed during the 3rd shinobi war so no they aren't alive. Alex doesn't necessarily care for the Uzumaki because the most that he knew of their abilities was Karin who didn't show any interesting abilities that warranted his attention. Hope this answers your question

sorry, i should've worded it better but at 2 years old Alex realized what world he was in and knew the dangers of said world but he would've been around 4 when he first started training due to Naruto having literal children fighting in wars and with the fact that Kakashi was 6 when he was granted permission to join the chunin exam i felt it made sense for a child to swing a sword. after all Kirigakure is notorious for their swordsmanship but you made a great point for the academy days but i felt that it would've slowed the story down because most people don't like reading about child-life etc. thanks for the comment i will try to articulate my words better in the future

Shinobis more or less have enhanced durability so I don't believe that if obito was saved in 5-10 mins that his entire half of his body would no longer function and be reduce to brittle bones... im pretty sure it took hours for Madara to rescue him which Madara needed to use hashirama cells to even heal obito

so question that i have is what if let's say a person is under the control of a powerful genjutsu and that said person was under that genjustsu for years is it reasonable that with Lelouch Geass the power of absolute obedience that he can just tell them to not be under said control if anybody has any information regarding this pls let me know as this has been in my mind for a while now. while creating my story

Ill probably start posting chapters until I hit chapter 10 or 15 then ill go back to every Thursday... maybe.. depends don't quote me on this

come on I had to add this scene its required by law as ordered by Lelouch vi Britannia

Author here i can't promise a stable update if you've seen the last novel i wrote i haven't updated a chapter in a year due to sudden events and i kinda wasn't in my right mind to update another thing given how little is known about how Kirigakure is built upon other than the caste system from what I've read in the manga and ln its hardly talked about so I'm basically making my own timeline and stuff. events that more prominent in the manga and anime will be there some changes will occur but ill try and keep it familiar also for right now no romance I'm not a good writer nor do i think i can write romance genius tag is there for the mc but as always the mc is only as smart as the author and I'm not that smart but ill try :(

Also I'll be posting chapters almost every Thursday probably don't quote me on this

Forgor to describe what alex looks like here you go

Okay I may have misread your comment but I believe that people should be off-limits while animals etc are freegain then again of you aren't going the crossover route you can just make your own grimm to suit the need of what your mc needs

We've have only seen Winter, Weiss and Willow being able to only summon Grimm even though they have defeated humans and robots. The knight she fought is a Geist which was explained as a Grimm that possesses inanimated objects. In one of manga it is explained that the Arma Gigas was an experiment done by the SDC, it's a suit of armor possessed by Geists, which Jaques made Weiss fight the Arma Gigas as a test. So probably not but you are the author so you have the ability to choose me personally I don't believe weiss should be able to summon people she has defeated that would defeat the whole purpose of her arsenal of Grimm. Why would she ever use Grimm if she could just summon a construct of someone like ruby for example. So me personally I would stick with just Grimm and animals but again you are the author. Sorry for the long reply hope this helps

so this isn't exactly the most exciting chapter, but it is necessary for the world-building that I'm trying to formulate.

Raijin's God mark

wrote this on my phone so sorry for grammar mistakes. and I cant stress this enough, I'm very thankful for your patience and thankful for everyone who wished me well on the last chapter.

Aye, I just got verified for power stones lez goo!!

I hope you enjoy it should probably point out that Charisma doesn't mean your looks or appearance; it just means how good your social skills are And yes, there are not only gods but demigods and the like

This story is quite interesting I enjoyed the different characters one thing that was weird was the descriptions I guess. but that's besides the point the characters are unique and have their own personality so good job to you author