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Zetsway2dKommentiertOh, sure, Cinder is just a poor misunderstood mass murderer that is not far from redemption, but Adam is too far gone, even if he has no idea that the endgame is to wipe humanity AND faunuskind of the planet. :)) The double standards in this fic are so in your face it's funny.
"Can't believe I was so naive to think someone as depraved and monstrous as you could change.. But it's impossible. The Adam I knew is gone forever. You're somebody else that just inhabits his body, nothing more" Blake prepared and took her stance, prompting Yang to do the same.- Zetsway3dAntwortet auf JustAReader3
It's a school, not a military boot camp. Students need to know more then to kill Grimm.
[>Raven Branwen: Not for a while. Your school is slow and weak. She needs training. I'll be training her so she can fulfill her promise to kill Salem<] - Zetsway3dKommentiert
You choose, your own enjoyment of the story is the most important, otherwise, you won't find the energy to write anymore.
Author Chooses - I do what I think would be the most interesting for the story. - Zetsway4dAntwortet auf TheBearB13
His life was spent on a boat so it's understandable.
Walking (Swift as Flying, Traversing Mountains and Ridges) - Zetsway5dKommentiert
If you can take suggestions, I think adding Raiser's whole peerage is too much. Not only would this be a severe slap on the Devil's faces, he also doesn't have the political backing to pull something like that off. Maybe and alliance with the Phenex so that Ravel can join, but I always felt like how you did it here didn't make much sense. And yeah, copy powers are cool wish-fufilment devices, but they make a story boring if they don't have some severe limitations.
Ch 13 Notice - Zetsway7dAntwortet auf Nyx_Alexander17
Um...Stark is not only in MCU.
Continuing to walk the streets of New York I worked to gather information, and in doing so I learned it was only the year 2000. Telling me that none of the events of the first MCU saga had begun yet. - Zetsway7dAntwortet auf Bossotronian12
It shouldn't work like that. If she is able to see that much, she is able to see him, because she is able to see all of his actions. The point of a 'blank' characters is to not be seen or predicted. She could probably see herself up to the point he came at her door, then it would have been blank because all of his actions 'don't' have a future so any reaction is not visible.
"Indeed you are." Ancient One replied. "Especially since I cannot see your future with the Eyes powers. You are in every sense of the word a wild card. I have no idea what the future holds in store for you, or you it." She explained to me. - Zetsway9dKommentiert
...yeah, because humans are individuals, not a whole...
"The fact humans are such contradictory creatures. One moment you all of you commit the worst atrocities imaginable against each other and the next your committing the greatest acts of mercy or kidness." ADAM answered. - Zetsway9dAntwortet auf TrueFamine
He had access tot he time stone and practiced in multiple time streams at the same time. He was reading all the books at the same time and practicing as he read, all in different timelines.
For I am now a recognized master of the mystic arts. - Zetsway9dAntwortet auf Reaper8726
Yeah, but it wasn't widespread until the mid 2010's
"Yes. May I please have the wifi password?" I asked. - Zetsway9dAntwortet auf Bossotronian12
And how did she know his name?
"Indeed you are." Ancient One replied. "Especially since I cannot see your future with the Eyes powers. You are in every sense of the word a wild card. I have no idea what the future holds in store for you, or you it." She explained to me. - Zetsway9dKommentiert
Isn't Boku no Pico just a normal world? Just don't live in japan :)))
I could've ended up reincarnated into Warhammer 40K or worse, Boku No Pico. - Zetsway9dAntwortet auf Lc_The_Second
Yeah..how did he even reach the conclusion he's in the MCU in the first place since the first thing he figured was that he was a mutant. The most logical conclusion would be the comics, or the X-Men movies I guess.
Continuing to walk the streets of New York I worked to gather information, and in doing so I learned it was only the year 2000. Telling me that none of the events of the first MCU saga had begun yet. - Zetsway9dVerschickt
Not really a story. In the first place, if you expect this to be a Dragon ball fanfiction, you'd be disappointed. It has 0 elements of Dragon Ball. It's set hundreds of years before canon and not even the power system is of Dragon ball...it's more like a cultivation magic thingy, not dragon ball. The MC also doesn't do anything. We are told that she is going around and doing stuff, but we see none of it. Lastly, the author feels the need to say the same thing over and over again. I've read a few chapters but the amount of times I've had to read that the MC is not talented in physical stuff is annoying. It's also way to slow...in over 100 chapters the MC didn't even reach her maturity...
- Zetsway10dKommentiert
If a farmer with a shotgun is a 5, 1 or 2 really is generous for a baby:))
If someone were to judge her for her potential or battle power by her current appearance then they would say that she was useless and had no worth as she probably had a power level between one or two even if they were being generous. - Zetsway10dAntwortet auf Rogueprogram
Maybe it's an evolved version:))
If anyone was to hear her then they may dismiss her words as if they were said by a crazed and demented old lady or a person with six grader syndrome but she seemed perfectly sane even if she did have a slightly crazy look in her eyes as she gazed over the research. - Zetsway10dKommentiert
...there aren't even Shinobi in the world, why would he call it Shinobi world. Just say world, Hagoromo doesn't know the future, or at least he shouldn't know specifics.
"Why do you protect the Shinobi World? With your power, it can't be hard for you to impose your will on the world or to just travel to new realms. What makes you choose to stay here and protect it?" - Zetsway10dAntwortet auf Ilovenovel
The spells themselves are not actually invoking the elder gods, it's just that using those spells with the dimensional energy of said elder god's domain will make it much more stronger.
"Crimson Bands of Cyttorak!!" she then said as crimson bands appeared on each of her hands and bound all the hands and tendrils of Moryo. - Zetsway10dKommentiert
Whenever I read about those 'localized' time stops I think about the planet being rendered apart by a piece of it suddenly stopping. I know it's fiction and all, but that image won't leave my head :))
However, the thing that Catherine would have the most growth in would have to be in her use of the Time Stone. While she had only barely scratched the surface of its true uses, especially since it wasn't bound to a singular universe, she had unlocked one of the major abilities of the stone: the ability to stop time. She had awakened this power around 3 years after coming to the cave, with her stopping time of the entire cave for around 30 seconds. She also noticed that the duration of the stopped time would decrease if she tried to stop time on a larger scale. She attributed this to her still not having an in-depth understanding of the stone. Although, she did use this ability to continuously stop her own time, practically making her unaging as long as she had the stone. - Zetsway11dKommentiert
WHAT!? A fallen Angel with BLACK feathers??? What is this? Such a twist. I could never imagine such a thing.
Irina quickly piqued in before anything could escalate because of Xenovia's hate for anyone working with the devils, "Kokabiel... He is the prime suspect of collecting the fragments... we just want to retrieve them. Rumors are going around that he also had someone working for him... someone leading his armies. It was a woman... she had black feathers... not only that... but she was rumored to have black-hair as well. She was a merciless killer."