Not really a story. In the first place, if you expect this to be a Dragon ball fanfiction, you'd be disappointed. It has 0 elements of Dragon Ball. It's set hundreds of years before canon and not even the power system is of Dragon ball...it's more like a cultivation magic thingy, not dragon ball. The MC also doesn't do anything. We are told that she is going around and doing stuff, but we see none of it. Lastly, the author feels the need to say the same thing over and over again. I've read a few chapters but the amount of times I've had to read that the MC is not talented in physical stuff is annoying. It's also way to slow...in over 100 chapters the MC didn't even reach her maturity...
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