X-Men: Onslaught

Intolerable MC makes this novel unreadable in my opinion. The MCs power is a kind of adaptability, everyone including him knows this. We get this sob story about how awful his life has been because he is a cripple, which is almost instantly solved just from him getting injured once and adapting. We find out then, that regardless of his woes and all the intelligent scientists and X-MEN that no one has ever suggested that the MC train physically at all or check to see his adaption. It is as if the MC and everyone else has made literally zero effort, not even a paper cut on his arm, to see how he adapts. On top of that we get the fking sob story from the goodie two shoes MC about him being a cripple while he was too stupid and lazy to do literally anything at all to improve his situation. I also skipped to the most recent chapter and the MC goes on this cringe “life is sacred” “no kill rant” and has to force himself to kill a man who r*ped 20 children to save an innocent little girls life. If that will not give you a clue with how delusional and pathetic this MC is then by all means you might enjoy reading this. Lastly, I hate the MCs written accent, it is annoying to read, and his demeanor, personality, incompetentence, softness, and idioicy disgust me beyond belief.

The main character is just boring, my biggest complaints are that the main character doesn’t change mentally. His buddy buddy with his bully(that almost killed him) then after weeks of torture he had no problems, like torture f@&$ a person’s mind up, but no he didn’t have any trauma after that. He is too goodi too shoe.

-Writing quality: Is simply great, -Stability of Update: Multiple chapters a day (Seriously author don't overwork yourself to death) -Story Development: The story has potential, and author is not wasting any of it. -Character Design: Mc is relatable and realistic same as all the side characters. -World Background: I'm not very knowledgeable about Marvel comics, but I can tell that author knows what he's doing and I don't feel left out honestly. I Think this story deserves my 5.0 stars and more, if you're reading this, give this story a try you won't regret it.

Couldn't even make it past chapter 2, this story is disgusting trash. Unnecessary forced hardship plots are stupid.

Não perca seu tempo MC é estupido para um caralho. Não perca seu tempo MC é estupido para um caralho. Não perca seu tempo MC é estupido para um caralho. Não perca seu tempo MC é estupido para um caralho.

Great novel its lore adjacent still good for the an xmen fan. I personally thought the Mc would be peers with the xmen not the new generation. If your not a fan of the new generation of xmen there are gonna be some hard to read parts that make you wanna wait for the build up of chapters.

Intolerable MC makes this novel unreadable in my opinion. The MCs power is a kind of adaptability, everyone including him knows this. We get this sob story about how awful his life has been because he is a cripple, which is almost instantly solved just from him getting injured once and adapting. We find out then, that regardless of his woes and all the intelligent scientists and X-MEN that no one has ever suggested that the MC train physically at all or check to see his adaption. It is as if the MC and everyone else has made literally zero effort, not even a paper cut on his arm, to see how he adapts. On top of that we get the fking sob story from the goodie two shoes MC about him being a cripple while he was too stupid and lazy to do literally anything at all to improve his situation. I also skipped to the most recent chapter and the MC goes on this cringe “life is sacred” “no kill rant” and has to force himself to kill a man who r*ped 20 children to save an innocent little girls life. If that will not give you a clue with how delusional and pathetic this MC is then by all means you might enjoy reading this. Lastly, I hate the MCs written accent, it is annoying to read, and his demeanor, personality, incompetentence, softness, and idioicy disgust me beyond belief.

So basically doomsday's powers? a bit nerfed though.Well considering he actually is in marvel not some transmigration or reincarnation stuff, and has been abandoned because he was a cripple I guess his lack of confidence and out of the box thinking will lack a lot so justifiable i guess?

is this a harem .......................?

Charcter design is a zero cause he never actually changes based on his experiences and dude is also buddy buddy with the guy who bullied him constantly for being a cripple the moment he is able to walk tf I couldnt get past ch 20

I enjoy reading this story, while its not the greatest story of all time, it is a fun read and allows me to enjoy love, loss and cool powers/ fight scenes.

There is promise but I think it kinda rushes itself in areas and sorta just expects you to know some of the situations from the comics to understand what’s going on, the main character is kinda good as there is some character development but at some point it reflects back on it self to just being too understanding and I’m smarter than the average teen or some usual fanfic trope of a underdeveloped character showing experience where he hasn’t had any. It could be better is what I’m saying, plus the heavy lean on the scot accent in the writing just dosnt make sense, I get it your Scottish but it makes what every others character say or talks about seem lacking because the dialogue effort is unevenly split

This story is awesome, and deserves more reviews, although it does follow the Comics, it has a nice touch. The MC has a cool power as well, which gradually becomes overpowered.

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I liked this x-men fanfiction. the writing was good, and the use of accents was unique. The progression of the story was good, but it felt like certain events were rushed and what could have been good character development was washed over. The cast of characters was wide and love and losses were felt, but something was missing that would move a person to loving and remembering a story. Would I recommend it to others to read? yes. Would I read it again? probably not.

It a first seems like a great concept but it’s honestly bland it’s comparable to those horrible mlt in story development. Just boring

Uma história interessante com ótimos momentos, se fosse dar a minha opinião eu diria que apesar de momentos meio apressados na história e as vezes desconectado ainda é muito divertida e eu pretendo acompanhar. Good Job

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