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Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds

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What is Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds

Lesen Sie den Roman Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds des Autors vorlefan, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.This is a tale of a man known as the Traveller. In the pursuit of his own meaning and his thirsty will to craft his worth, he found himself facing the darkness of the world. In a deadly fight for surv...

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This is a tale of a man known as the Traveller. In the pursuit of his own meaning and his thirsty will to craft his worth, he found himself facing the darkness of the world. In a deadly fight for survival, he shall tell his story. And as if each road should have, this is a tale of sorrow, a tale of wandering, a tale of one soul's search for the escape of his own fate, and how that search, and the fearless will that drove it, gave birth to a legend. FAQ: Dialogues: Maybe one of the most challenging aspects of my writing would be dialogue. Since I'm from Brazil, we have tons and tons of ways of speaking the same thing, using different styles and words. For the effect of compassion, you can picture listening to traditional rap. Example in dialogue: "Listen to me", in Brazil is way too formal, here the equivalent in day-to-day dialogue would be: "Listen me" or "Hear me out". Of course, I'll do it only for dialogues, because I know that this can be considered a flaw in grammar and structure. What should I expect from the story? It's a slow-to-medium burn, the character-focused story mixed with worldbuilding. Some details are revealed from the dialogues, whereas others are from the background composition. Take this like an orchestra, the main instruments are the characters, but in the background, burning slowly are the worldbuilding, the power, the society, and so on. What's unique about it? The power construction and cultivation, it's based on the psychological point of view, such as personality, traits, and flaws. There is duality so nothing is static and recorded in stone. Someone weaker could defeat someone stronger if he uses the flaws and traits of his opponent, and of course if he plays more smartly. What are your inspirations? Games, animes, books, and movies. I can name some: Fullmetal Alchemist; Hunter x Hunter; One Piece; The Name of the Wind; Lord of the Rings; Mistborn; Final Fantasy; Rogue Galaxy. What I should know before reading? English isn't my mother language, in fact, while I write the story, I'm learning the language more profoundly. The chapters are either edited until the second draft or released after I just finish, which takes a long time of my day to do, because of the struggle to write in a way that does not sound so "rusty" and "awkward". What are the tones of the story? It has its dark side, the struggle of society, madness, and so on; however, I enjoy a lot of the feeling of "adventure" and "it must be funny", so you should expect some fun parts.  Chapter length? About 2000 words in average The frequency? Slow because of my workload as freelancer and businessperson, lots of calls and projects to work on as a software engineers, then it takes a lot of my time. Copyright - 2023 Michael Willian Santos (vorlefan) All rights reserved. This notice indicates that the work is protected by copyright, identifies the copyright owner (Michael Willian Santos, vorlefan), and indicates the year of publication (2023). The phrase "All rights reserved" further emphasizes that the work is protected and that no one may use it without permission.

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vorlefan
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Hey there, author here xD If you have any questions about the novel, you can leave reply here! 1. First, I must say that this is my first attempt to write and create a novel, my only experience in this regard is that I have read tons of novel. So please, if you have tips, send me. 2. The english language isn't my mother language, so if there are gramatical error or strange sentences, please let me know. 3. How often are you updating? Well, currently I work as a freelancer software engineer — I need to make a living xD, so I'll try to maintain at least 1 chapter per day. 4. What to expect? Comedy, dark scenes, heated enemies, ruined society, interesting worldbuilding and a unique cultivation system.

Riley_23
Riley_23Lv2Riley_23

WRITING QUALITY: 5/5 The grammar is really good. The way that this was written was so easy to understand. No unnecessary expositions. Straight to the point just like how I like it. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 4/5 It's still too early to judge but I am giving 4/5 because I checked the table of contents and found that the first chap was uploaded a month ago while there are only 13 chaps. I'm not complaining because at the end of the day, I'd still prefer to read the book that updates only once a week but well-written than the other way around. (But I still prefer a well-written daily update.) STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5/5 No need to say anything. Read the first chapter and you'll know. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5/5 They have their own accent, baby! Need I say more? The interactions between characters are believable. Not cardboard cut outs. WORLD BACKGROUND: 5/5 I can visualize the place as I read. And there are no unnecessary expositions. PS. It was good but I just wished the paragraphs were a tad shorter though you can ignore this one. I just prefer shorter paragraphs. That's why.

BeckyAnimeGirl54
BeckyAnimeGirl54Lv2BeckyAnimeGirl54

This is a interesting story with a cool color. I liked the interactions of the characters. I would recommend this story. Keep up the good work.

krish_patel
krish_patelLv2krish_patel

This book is amazing! It got a likeable mc, the plot is interesting,good pace, good writing quality and great fight scenes. One small suggestion is to improve sentence structure in the early chapter

Ghostuchichq
GhostuchichqLv2Ghostuchichq

I have ridden till ch 10 and from what I have ridden I can say that this story is pretty interesting and good. I liked the way how you describes the world and the characters. I also liked the MC as he is kinda op and cool and not dumb as in other novels. But I would like to say that you should work on world-building. Overall this novel is pretty good and intresting.

Coyle
CoyleLv3Coyle

When I was reading this story I felt like I was reading a fairy tale (an enticing one I must say). The fighting scenes are very well written and the characters are likable. As a fellow author, I applaud you for that. You did a great job!

AceAmbrosia
AceAmbrosiaLv13AceAmbrosia

This is one of the best novels I've read. The beginning was beautiful, and it felt like I was reading poetry. I love the accents of the characters. The descriptions are well-made and offer insight to the events as if I were a spectator. Amazing!

Suzu_Rim
Suzu_RimLv11Suzu_Rim

The story has been good so far. The world building is great! I love how Javer character has a different kind of speaking (?) because he was from different region! it's a nice touch!

INK_arcerated
INK_arceratedLv2INK_arcerated

I love the start to this. The detail almost flows around you as it drags you under and into this world the author has created, like the rapids of a river. One thing I would say however is that it is slightly hard t understand sometimes when it comes to the dialogue.

UnreliableJones_
UnreliableJones_Lv2UnreliableJones_

Just from the first three chapters, I can already assume that the novel is gonna be a blast to read! The most important aspect of any novel: the way it is written. All I can say about that is the fact that it is PERFECT! The way things are described, the way the text is written just flows perfectly, it is just perfect all the way! The characters are also very complex and good to understand! The other aspects of the novel are very well handled, it was just a fun read overall; I can't wait to read more of this later TL;DR Good novel, make sure to read it if you have time to spare!

Vanilla_Chino
Vanilla_ChinoLv3Vanilla_Chino

Guys when I say the author is a master of crafting a scene with descriptive language, I truely do mean it. The world and characters are also just really well paced; not too fast for you to digest. This story reminds me a bit of berserk and frieren. Just a good vibe with well balanced action as well as slice of life dialogue banter moments. Keep it up author! Amazing work.

Kuroitsuki
KuroitsukiLv4Kuroitsuki

The beginning of the book was nothing less than poetry itself. Descriptive writing will force you to imagine things you have never thought about. Like a cherry on the top the grammar is perfect as well. Hope this reaches the target audience

Zenith_Seraph
Zenith_SeraphLv1Zenith_Seraph

based on what i read i don't believe that English is your second language its well written i can feel what the characters feel understand what the go through the author made a very unique and understandable characters i give this novel 9.7/10 its so good if any one want to read a good novel i highly recommend.

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WriterTheosLv13WriterTheos

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It is really good for my liking they describe the world good it is really a good book asrid is the main character right? cool name

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First of all, I can confidently say that this is a story you won't regret reading. The writing quality improves after the chapters the author mentioned. The world is intriguing, and the events aren't rushed or overly complicated. When something happens, the author explains it in detail and consistently to avoid leaving any questions in our minds. Moreover, as you read, you can see that the author progresses in a planned, not random, manner. It's a great story, well done to the author!

Haizao
HaizaoLv14Haizao

Traveler's Will is very solidly written, especially once the chapters reach the 20s and over. The author's sense of pace is very deliberate with the details, and really makes you feel the situation in a granular sense. The main character, Asdras, is strongly crafted, and while there is a System, it's not front-and-center in a way that interferes with the enjoyment. (Though that does make it a little harder to wrap one's head around). There are a few word use issues that are more obtuse than incorrect, and narratively I did find the MC gets his hand held by the plot somewhat, with other characters pushing him along a lot at times. But overall it's a solid read and quite enjoyable! Definitely good potential.

Moonflower414
Moonflower414Lv2Moonflower414

This book has a very traditional book feel and has eloquent writing by the author. From the very first chapter to the very end, the writing has been flowy and very understandable with a poetic touch. The variety of language is commendable and the pace is very stable, not too fast and not too slow. I wish the author would update sooner but apart from that i have no complaints and can recommend the book wholeheartedly, as it's worth the while. The immersive plot and writing of the author, are like chefs kiss, and the ml is written beautifully.

WRChowdhury
WRChowdhuryLv1WRChowdhury

Absolutely amazing! The writing standard is phenomenal and the vibrant descriptions truly breathe life into this book. A masterpiece, so far.

Pitiful_Soul
Pitiful_SoulLv10Pitiful_Soul

Amazing and promising stry, good character development, Gonna bookmark this novel!..................................................................................................................

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