Hey there, author here xD If you have any questions about the novel, you can leave reply here! 1. First, I must say that this is my first attempt to write and create a novel, my only experience in this regard is that I have read tons of novel. So please, if you have tips, send me. 2. The english language isn't my mother language, so if there are gramatical error or strange sentences, please let me know. 3. How often are you updating? Well, currently I work as a freelancer software engineer — I need to make a living xD, so I'll try to maintain at least 1 chapter per day. 4. What to expect? Comedy, dark scenes, heated enemies, ruined society, interesting worldbuilding and a unique cultivation system.

WRITING QUALITY: 5/5 The grammar is really good. The way that this was written was so easy to understand. No unnecessary expositions. Straight to the point just like how I like it. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 4/5 It's still too early to judge but I am giving 4/5 because I checked the table of contents and found that the first chap was uploaded a month ago while there are only 13 chaps. I'm not complaining because at the end of the day, I'd still prefer to read the book that updates only once a week but well-written than the other way around. (But I still prefer a well-written daily update.) STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5/5 No need to say anything. Read the first chapter and you'll know. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5/5 They have their own accent, baby! Need I say more? The interactions between characters are believable. Not cardboard cut outs. WORLD BACKGROUND: 5/5 I can visualize the place as I read. And there are no unnecessary expositions. PS. It was good but I just wished the paragraphs were a tad shorter though you can ignore this one. I just prefer shorter paragraphs. That's why.

This is a interesting story with a cool color. I liked the interactions of the characters. I would recommend this story. Keep up the good work.

This book is amazing! It got a likeable mc, the plot is interesting,good pace, good writing quality and great fight scenes. One small suggestion is to improve sentence structure in the early chapter

I have ridden till ch 10 and from what I have ridden I can say that this story is pretty interesting and good. I liked the way how you describes the world and the characters. I also liked the MC as he is kinda op and cool and not dumb as in other novels. But I would like to say that you should work on world-building. Overall this novel is pretty good and intresting.

When I was reading this story I felt like I was reading a fairy tale (an enticing one I must say). The fighting scenes are very well written and the characters are likable. As a fellow author, I applaud you for that. You did a great job!

This is one of the best novels I've read. The beginning was beautiful, and it felt like I was reading poetry. I love the accents of the characters. The descriptions are well-made and offer insight to the events as if I were a spectator. Amazing!

The story has been good so far. The world building is great! I love how Javer character has a different kind of speaking (?) because he was from different region! it's a nice touch!

I love the start to this. The detail almost flows around you as it drags you under and into this world the author has created, like the rapids of a river. One thing I would say however is that it is slightly hard t understand sometimes when it comes to the dialogue.

Different from what you usually find her. The start is dark, and by the time you realize what's happening, you are invested in the story and the style. The author uses colorful language, which might be hard to read if it's not your first language, but very enjoyable.