Vanilla_Chino
Writing is a hobby and hopefully will be a career one day. Currently an animation student and am practicing my script writing skills on here. Feel free to leave brutal feedback, I can take it.
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Thanks for all the comments, been reading them and it helps with feedback as well as make me feel good that you’re still reading 😭. Glad you’re returning to this novel. It’s perhaps my favorite one I’ve written and yet the one with the least attention.
So far great, keep it up author!
Guys when I say the author is a master of crafting a scene with descriptive language, I truely do mean it. The world and characters are also just really well paced; not too fast for you to digest. This story reminds me a bit of berserk and frieren. Just a good vibe with well balanced action as well as slice of life dialogue banter moments. Keep it up author! Amazing work.
Bro, you can’t keep getting away with these masterpieces. How is this not your native first language? You’re so good at this!?
Dude this is making me hungry
Dude you are a poet with these mesmerizing words
Love this banter between them. Feels dynamic and fresh, never dull
World building goes hard, like very creative
Menacing
Saint rose… I need lore on the god system
You really do have a way with words