Item: THE POISON DEITY
Rating: 5
Author: Rainandstorm

RainandstormLv21yr

2023-05-27 05:08

Alright, this is just mind blowing, to be honest, at first when I saw it was a cultivation novel, I was like having doubts about how it would turn out to be... But men, I can believe I would actually love something like this, I mean, c'mon this book is literally amazing, I love the fact that the chapters are many, it would make it a lot easier to dive deeper into the story... I really do can't wait to binge reading this... I love the suspense and the characters are really simply relatable .. overall, this book is simply awesome 👌👌

THE POISON DEITY

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