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the Pain of Power

okay, this is my first story, and the first time i have ever tried to write a story like this. If you have something to say to help me improve the story (without changing everything) i will gladly try to implement the changes, i will talk this as a chance to improve my writing skills and styles

neko_meow · Fantasie
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Chapter 3: New Quest

'So, how can you help me get out of this situation QS?'

the girl continued on without mentioning the Quest system's pun

"well, how about you give yourself a name, i can make that a Quest and reward you for it"

the Quest system had a plan

suddenly words appeared in front of the girl

"New Quest unlocked: Create New Name"

"Alright, my name will now be.....Elenvan, that works right?"

the girl was not that good at naming things, including herself it seems

"Quest completed, Reward: 1 set of clothes, 1 spear, 2 paddles, and 1 level one inventory bag"

the Elenvan's reward appeared in the bag, as she pulled the items out she realized that she was going to have to get out of the ocean using her own strength

'can i at least get more space on my chunk of wood?'

she hoped at least she would get enough to move around on

"do more quests to obtain more items"

Elenvan sighed and asked 'what is the next quest?'

"New Quest Unlocled: Kill 2 Fish"