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The Astral Chronicles - The fourth Age: Coming of Dawn

Autor: Old_Panda
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What is The Astral Chronicles - The fourth Age: Coming of Dawn

Lesen Sie den Roman The Astral Chronicles - The fourth Age: Coming of Dawn des Autors Old_Panda, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel."When the 13-pointed star will rise again, the final battle will take place, and the world shall take form anew." This is a story about good and evil and 13 chosen ones, carrying the weight of the wor...

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"When the 13-pointed star will rise again, the final battle will take place, and the world shall take form anew." This is a story about good and evil and 13 chosen ones, carrying the weight of the world on their shoulders.

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daoist123456
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Based on first chapters writing quality seems good. However paragraphs are lengthy when reading on smartphone. Prelude sets story in overall broader context, hinting at different hierarchy between races? Prologue good for getting to know how author things about characters, in terms of setting background/motivations etc. Simple language used, as chapter focused on thoughts of young girl. Big discrepancy to writing in prelude. Overall makes me motivated to read though

wonderingpanda
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Authors Note is a bit off-putting - but his choice. First Chapter good writing so far, makes me excited for what is to come. Sad that author wont publish on regular basis.

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