Review Detail of daoist123456 in The Astral Chronicles - The fourth Age: Coming of Dawn

Based on first chapters writing quality seems good. However paragraphs are lengthy when reading on smartphone. Prelude sets story in overall broader context, hinting at different hierarchy between races? Prologue good for getting to know how author things about characters, in terms of setting background/motivations etc. Simple language used, as chapter focused on thoughts of young girl. Big discrepancy to writing in prelude. Overall makes me motivated to read though