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Revenge is always sweet

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Hideo is a normal decent looking middle school student who fell in love with a girl and confessed to her. They became a couple but, the girl already had a boyfriend and was only using him to order him around. After knowing the truth, hideo became depressed and did not go to school. After a year of being depressed and being persuaded by his parents to come back to school, he came back but his body and his face greatly changed he became fat and his face was full of pimples. People started to bully him and girl looks at him full of disgust but, this did not got him discouraged and started to exercise and diet. After months of hard work he became more muscular than before and his face started to become clearer. For hideo this is not good enough. He wants to be more charismatic so, he can get his revenge on the people who used him, guys who bullied him and he specifically want to get his revenge on aimi the girl he confessed to but, used him. Suddenly, the end of his 2nd year in middle school he got a dream that greatly changed him and his body.... The world that mc visited: prison school, hotd, mahouka koukou no rettousei Ongoing:shokugeki no souma(food wars) and attack on titan world Disclaimer: english is not my first language and the first few chapters are hard to read and there is a lot of contradictions, since I was only writing to pass the time in this quarantine....please bear with it if you can. You can skip to the prison school fanfic part if you want to. I’m considering on rewriting the first few chapters if I have the time to do so... Art is not mine credits to the maker

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FictionOnlyReader · Anime und Comics
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314 Chs
Inhaltsverzeichnis
Volumen 1
Volumen 2 :Prison school
Volumen 3 :Original world
Volumen 4 :HIGH SCHOOL OF THE DEAD
Volumen 5 :Original world 3
Volumen 6 :Mahouka koukou no rettousei
Volumen 7 :Original world 4
Volumen 8 :Food wars - shokugeki no souma

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It is hard to make a review of this novel as there are as many bad things on it as there are good. Whatever, Let's get on with it. Writing Quality: There are many typos scattered all around the chapters, there is no chapter that has at least one, the delivery is average and nothing particularly outstanding, yet it can be considered decent to others I have read on this site so, 3 stars. Stability of Updates: So far, there are plenty of chapters so, good. Story Development: There is quite a bit of development in this novel, MC kind of grows up to a certain extent, I liked the whole Mahouka arc as it wasn't just MC throwing OP spells left and right, MC genuinely worked hard to marry Maya and I like it. Character Design: MC's character although I didn't like it at the beginning for being too much of a bastard and not one of my tastes. I kind of understand his behavior I mean we're talking about girls that made his life hell, so it is understandable in a big scope, after his revenge is done, he tones it down. I consider Shiori, Aimi, Ichinose, and Ryouka (?) good OCs I would have liked further development with Risa, but that's good as well. As for the fictional characters, some are loyal to their personalities, some aren't but the characters are likable regardless. World Background: Good enough, nothing really important to distinguish here. As for my personal opinion: Well, I believe this novel could have had a better path than the one it took, at the beginning, I didn't like it as my type of Smut is Vanilla, maybe that's why I liked Mahouka Arc. That mini-series of vengeance against the wife that was cheating on the husband was probably the closest you got to what you wanted to be accomplished in this series. Just as NTR is painfull, there is nothing better than the retribution. And I'm sure that what most people hate about NTR is not the actual NTR but the fact that MC doesn't do FK ALL about it when most readers if put in his position would be out for blood. You have the perfect chance for that here, it is good doing stories like Mahouka and all that but I believe the objective of this fanfic should be something like: 'Make MC reincarnate into the body of Otome Dori's MC after he saw the videos and plan his vengeance. First, retrieve the girl with most ******** *** possible. Second get in touch with all those bastards' wives and daughters, destroy their businesses etc etc...' If you did something like with all those hentai that have left people frustrated, you would have a masterpiece here, and you don't even need to keep the girls in the harem as he will be ejected from the world he was in, so it is more like mini-stories. Well, best regards.

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