REINCARNATED AS SON GOHAN IN THE ONE-PIECE WORLD

Considering kid Goku have enough power to destroy the planet (damage the core causing explosion) with his ki energy, gohan in a world where the top powers can only destroy islands is too easy no?

Okay this story in my opinion is just meh like I enjoyed how we have an op mc in having gohan or someone who has gohan body but the main issue are the author is not spacing enough so it is legit so hard to follow who is talking plus we know nothing of the mc we don’t even know what is name is before this whole rebirth started. Like he just shows up in the one piece world freaks out for like 5 secs and then he is like oh yeah adventure exploring F my family and friends I am now in one piece bye bye lame old boring home see ya never. Now in my humble opinion the author should have ran with the trauma of him not seeing his loved ones to make him feel more human and then thanks to his friendship with the Straw Hats he will overcome this challenge and start to see them as his family and maybe unlock his ultimate form (not like he needs it but would have been pretty cool to read).

This is going very well. The SI is Gohan, so everyone should expect that he is top dog in the One Piece world. There isn't even a question. Now, with OP characters, things can get boring very fast, but, luckily the author chose the make the MC a bit of an Observer/Teacher for his friends. The story also follows canon in the best way possible. Things aren't artificially changed, they change based on the insert's actions. And, obviously, the conclusions are different. It also sets the fic up for some major changes further along without making the universe AU.

Interesting idea, but I just really don't like the writing quality. 13 chapters in and the same common mistakes are being made. Back to back quotations for when people are talking making it hard to figure out who sade one. Someone's there's no spacing between words or periods. Using the word 'and' alot even immediately after a period. Not capitalizing names or certain words. I just can't continue reading with that type of writing quality.

Good so far. A bit fast passed but still has enough time for character development and comedic moments.

i don't like his attitude. He's not fitting well with the straw hat. Author keep making him threaten his crewmate as joke. ngl people who use threats as joke don't have many friends. they not gonna be like his friends, but more like underling. bruhh.. one piece is all about nakama

In some places spaces are missing, and some sentences should be on the same line, fix it and this will be gold.one question by the way, who is the female lead if anyone is there

*sigh* 3 months of no update still. I'll see you around and hope you come back to this, Author-san

is this dropped??? story so far is great ..i like the idea of having gohan as mc...but updates please

What happened to the daily uploads? Man, this was a fun read but suddenly took a pause for a long while now that I honestly forgot the current and previous plots already

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What can I say? Very enjoyable read. I liked this alot. Cant wait for more chaps!

It's interesting story. Specially for someone who just started writing. Don't give up and surprise us with new and better stories. D. R r r r e. Ee d. De. De s. S s ss. S ss s s s s. S s

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It's ok but could be improved in writing ....................................................................................................................................

The story is good and all, the fact that a sayian is in the OP world may be too overwhelming, Gohan is a little too savage, and it seems that he is speedrunning the arcs as if they were nothing, too fast and the power scales are not that clear about Ki.

Funny and well-written.

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