PlaneWalker’s Guide To The Multiverse

Another Shameless Author giving himself a five star review. On a serious note, I hope anyone who enjoys my story and all who take the time to leave a review can help me improve as a writer. Whether you liked it or not. I would still like to know what made you feel that way about my story. Thanks for giving my story a shot. I hope you like where I plan to go with it.

A really good book,very well written reminds me off grandpa universe Like grandpa universe I hope you dont write to many r18 scenes and keep it slice of life instead

This is a fun story it isn't long or hard to read and I am looking forward to what you write it would be nice if you continue this is a relaxing read for me after all.

You really spoiled the idea of this novel. I expected a lot of her from reading this idea of going to the worlds anime of training there exploring the world Talking to the characters but you make the story not even 1% of her potential. Note I only read 8 chapters

This is a really good novel to pass the time. It’s enjoyable, interesting and it shed’s light on certain series that most over look. Not to mention the author seems to be actually enjoying themselves as they write. I mean having Tea with uncle Iroh? Come on thats most Avatar fans dream in a nut shell. The explanation of why he goes to certain worlds is my favourite. Even though I’m not familiar with them I still understand what is happening and why he is there. I also like the way he is collecting souvenirs from some of the worlds he visits. This is a slice of life type of journey through the multiverse. Not like your typical world traveling novel at all. The wishes he made were also done in a really interesting and unique way. None of the typical randomly chosen by god, or truck-kun isekai. I really like the way it all went down. It just felt like a breathe of fresh air. The fact he gives his dog superpowers is also hilarious and cute as heck.

Not a bad story, just not my cup of tea. Main character is frustratingly boring when it comes to using his powers... then he decides to bring his dog with him and give his dog powers... and the ability to speak. Why? I don't know. Is it a bad thing per say? No. But I don't find it entertaining to read personally, that's all. I definitely approve of his wishes though. Good choices.

Bueno es algo interesante pero en los mundos en los que viaja desearía que se adentrara un poco más como en el mundo de hp (? Algunas cosas podría sacar y que nadie extrañaría o cosas como en el mundo de marvel eliminar auna persona que no vale la pena dejar continuar como el hombre de violeta o viajar al dcu para conocer a raven uff o alguna tamaraniana o alguna kriptoniana o algún fanfics diferente de otro universo

The grammar alone makes me want to give this a five star review. It’s not perfect, but it’s legible and clear. With very few glaring spelling mistakes. Something almost totally foreign to me on this site.

This is a fun novel with a nice start. While I do wish the author stayed in some worlds longer they said the MC would likely return to them eventually, so I’m still hopeful. At 10 chapters there isn’t much I can say for character development beyond him becoming a Demi god and his dog gaining a human intellect and super powers. Which was actually quite fun to read. I loved Underdog as a kid so seeing those powers and that world used in such a way was brilliant. The start does feel expositiony at times. But it never drags on. The references are also kept far enough apart that they don’t feel forced or over used. So far I like where this is going and I hope to see more soon.

overall it is a nice slice of life story but the major weakness being the pointless back and forth travelling with no sense... And also if u are looking for a story with plot then I think u should look for somewhere else. P.s: still pissed that a talented writer is just writing a slice of life without plots or any forward momentum(could have written another fic with plot ..)

This book is amazing, Dragonball Mcu bruce almighty, Damachi, The last airbender etc with a talking dog with a voice of queen latifia lol Sorry I think I mispelled her name/ This is amazing, I give this another review because I didnt read it before, Surpassed all of my expectations, the grammar is a bit edgy but I could careless. Cant wait to see what you have planed next

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Sorry, while it isn't badly written, I just couldn't get into this fanfic even after fifteen chapters... The worlds lack detail, there is no real story with a plot (not that I expected one from a world hopping fanfic) and yet the rest does not convince me to read further at all. The worlds are also not explored or shown at all. The fact that his dog is his only and closest companion and basically the only one we witness conversations with is also a major factor for me disliking this. Basically, while the start is not bad, the rest is for me :/

Just finish this one. It's not your typical planes walker where he stay in the world for 20 chapter and change the plot by rescuing people. But it's more like "I'm going to shop in this world, collect some abandoned stuff and finally get some furry pussy.."... Although there's some hiccup and basic mistake, I can see that this story have a good potential... Nicely done.. Good writing..