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I think it would make more sense if magic in humans originated from interbreeding with magical species. Flitwick, Hagrid, and Fleur are all proof that Goblins, Giants and Veela can mix with humans. It would also make it extremely ironic that all the pure bloods disparage different species if their powers all originated from their ancestors getting in bed with those same creatures.
Thanks for another great chapter. I did notice a minor error though; Sandor’s horse is a courser not a destrier. This is straight from the wiki “Stranger is a heavy courser, almost as large as a destrier but much faster.”
I would agree, except the reason he became a psychopath in the first place was because he lost his family. So him travelling with them like this, and treating them like the family he lost, actually makes perfect sense in my mind. But to each their own.
Just saying, but It’s Dr. McCoy, not Mr.
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I don’t think it was stated
Harry was 11
Ok that’s completely fair. And thank you for responding. I honestly love the way you are using a small aspect of Enel’s devil fruit ability to make it seem like your MC has a completely different power set. It’s super unique. After going back and watching Enel vs Luffy, I do see that the way Enel manipulated metal was more advanced than I originally thought. I guess I just didn’t expect him to have this much control. And if you’re introducing other metals later then I have nothing to say on that matter and I look forward to reading it 🫡
You seem to have a fundamental misunderstanding about lightning so allow me to clear up a few things. First, lightning doesn’t move at the speed of light, it’s actually a lot slower and doesn’t move in a straight line. Second, the damage caused by the worst lighting storm in all of earths history doesn’t even come close to the damage caused by the worst volcanic eruption. Lightning may burn hotter than magma, but the destructive potential of a volcano is far greater than that of lighting. Third… ok, I’ll admit this one’s less about lightning about more about metal, but my point still stands - Silver and copper are both more conductive than gold while being denser and less expensive. Pure gold is pretty easily damaged and just serves to paint a target on his back. Enel was also never shown to possess that level of control over the gold he wields and your story didn’t really show your MC training in that manner so it kind of came out of no where. Sorry if this is nitpicky, I really do enjoy the story, I just had to say that or it would sit in my brain and annoy me as I kept reading. I really am loving it so far I swear 😅