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Naruto: Ōtsutsuki lineage

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Read ‘Naruto: Ōtsutsuki lineage’ Online for Free, written by the author theusual, This book is a Anime & Comics Fanfic, covering ACTION Fanfiction, ROMANCE Fan Fiction, REINCARNATION Fanfiction Net, and the synopsis is: A lonely man, lover of manga and anime, travels to the world of Naruto, where ninja life is cruel and is reborn in a fam...

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A lonely man, lover of manga and anime, travels to the world of Naruto, where ninja life is cruel and is reborn in a family branch of the Hyuga clan, Hyuga Chen, who thought he would die young, received the Ōtsutsuki lineage by opening the system . Chen said: I don't know how much my sword will allow you to run for a year. -------------------------------------------------- --------------- I warn you that the timeline is slightly different. For instance, the dates of important events. I found the novel and wanted to rewrite it here to improve my English and earn some money.If you have some extra money, support me on Patr*on: patr*on.com/Athome790 (Replace * with e) - - -- --

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Hanbin seorang anak laki-laki dari dua bersaudara. Dia memiliki seorang adik laki-laki bernama Hyunjin. Dia sangat menyayangi adiknya sejak kecil, mereka hidup rukun berdampingan. Semua berakhir saat perceraian kedua orang tuanya, Hanbin ikut appa dan Hyunjin ikut eommanya. Mereka berpisah dan kehidupan mereka berubah. Hanbin tinggal bersama eomma dan appa tirinya yang kejam dan ditaktor, usia mereka hanya terpaut kurang dari sepuluh tahun. Hanbin di perlakukan buruk oleh kakak tirinya Seungwoo dan juga adik tirinya Seungmin. Hanbin ingin kabur dari rumah namun dia di pasung di kamarnya, dia menangis ketakutan sepanjang malam. Hyunjin dia bersama Appanya dan eomma tirinya yang sangat menyayangi dia. Saudara tirinya nunanya Hyunah juga sangat peduli dengannya, begitu juga dengan hyung tirinya Hyojong juga sangat mencintai dia. Dia memiliki seorang adik tiri yang sangat suka di manjakan olehnya, Hongseok. Hyunjin sangat merindukan hyungnya Hanbin, suatu malam dia meminta bantuan nunanya untuk mengantarkan dia bertemu eomma dan hyungnya. Hyunah mengantarnya dengan mobil pribadi miliknya, mereka pergi bersama Hyojong dan Hongseok. Hyunjin menggedor-gedor pintunya, di sana dia bertemu dengan Seungwoo dengan tatapan super dingin. Dia membukakan pintu, Eommanya keluar dan terlihat tidak suka. Seungmin segera berlari menuju kamar pembantu untuk melepaskan Hanbin dan mengancamnya. Hanbin berjalan tertatih dan dia meneteskan air mata berjumpa adiknya. Hyunjin shock berat melihat penampilan hyungnya yang kumal dan lusuh. Hanbin membisikkan kata-kata untuk membawanya pergi, Hyunjin berusaha mengiyakannya. "Eomma, bolehkah aku pergi makan bersama hyung?" tanya Hyunjin "Tentu saja, jangan lupa antar hyungmu yaa nak" ucap eommanya Mereka pergi, Hanbin menangis tersedu-sedu di dalam mobil. Dia menceritakan semuanya dan dia tidak ingin kembali. Hyunjin tidak dapat memahami kenapa eommanya bisa sekejam itu. Mereka memutuskan membawa Hanbin pulang. Akankah Hanbin berhasil kabur ataukah dia akan melewati hal yang lebih menakutkan lagi?

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Luizz_Ricardo
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I abandoned this story, why? well the protagonist says that even though he has an otsutsuki lineage+wise body+tenseigam+pika pika no mi he wouldn't be strong at 17 like naruto and sasuke, wow man the mc can stay still until he's 15 and he'll have more chakra what a hashirama

Zarek8_31_07
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It feels like a machine translation and the world, story, and main character have all the depth of cardboard. Let me give you a tip when it comes to editing and grammar; If it were run through Grammarly and the obvious Chinese influence (all the freakin proverbs) was paved over and replaced, I could see this getting a good 4/5 stars. An even better idea would be to take what you like from the original fanfic and make your own fanfic from the premise, because the IDEA was great, but Chinese fanfic authors kinda suck at the execution, ngl.

KaratePepe
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I can't decide if this is a translation or just bad English. Also, it annoys me how you refer to MC by his full name.

NetoXIII
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Congratulations on the novel, interesting to put a hyuuga with MC, there are almost no novels with this theme. ____________________________________

Researcher_Abrax
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Hope, you'll continue your translation. I really like tenseigan stories. Does anyone know of little-known ones? (Like Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan)

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