Mr.Bee Violinist

I hope you guys could leave comments below and give advice to further improve the story. You guys could also suggest thing to be added into the story. Critiques are extremely welcomed here. If there are grammar errors or need work areas please comment down so that i can fix them immediately. -Slyc

The writing quality is occasionally inconsistent throughout the chapters. It might be great occasionally but it occasionally might be slightly bad because of some grammatical errors and sentence confusions. The stability of updates has yet to be determined because he has only posted a couple of chapter in a day but it seems to be quite good. Story development is gonna get sick bc I'm calling it XD. Also the main character has a bit of an inconsistency in personality. Might be good to some people might be not as well. The main character offs between loser and hero on and off throughout the first few chapters. Prob focus on that. For the world background try adding a slightly dystopian like world based on the medieval age and a mix of Japanese culture in it. Looking forward to the future of your novel. Salutations from this mister.

While the writing needed a bit of improvement on the side It's still a very nice novel to read. It has good characters and the emotions shown on the characters are quite good. Although there might be some downs to this novel compared to other novels it's still good. The MC has a really good twisted past so that's definitely a plus from me. I'll definitely comeback in the future once in a while to check on things after i read some of my other novels.

it's a good story. the story starts off pretty well in my opinion. I haven't got bored of it, so that good. All in all, I have no oppositions with rating this a 5 star review.

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I prefer protagonist who think more about their action but he's not bad because he's kind of interesting in a crazy way. It's also a kind of dark story I guess, so try it and see if it's for you. What I would like right now is to get explained about all the things happening, so please do that next! Also, English is my second language so I don't really care about the few grammatical errors in the novel (getting care of by now I think) and excuse my mistakes (if there are)

The writing was a bit inconsistent but world background, story and idea wise it was amazing. Looking forward to more updates:) Also the mc is completely awesome.

I really like the way you created a separate chapter for stats. To be honest, I might steal this idea. The story is good. Easy to stay engaged and captivated.

Cool story bro...ughhh....what was I planning to say again? definitely isn't something like EXP...hmmm.....ahh yes, I'll just go with "Ain't that bad at all!" cool...now i'm going to dive back down into the murky water that is the comment section.

A good novel with a good plot and good writing. You should read it. Also read my novel if you're looking for a novel to read. Search up LCIE, or click on my name, which will bring you to my profile. Click on the novel that's named 'Our Love is Like a Circle, Infinite and Everlasting'. It's not romance; the story will mainly focus on the character development of the MC. Anything else is just a plot device to further the story.

Everything is good except the ntr in the beginning and since you are my friend I will ignore it and give 5 star ............................................................................................................................ Is it already 140 word, my del button almost broken!

This story has a lot of potential! It kept me captivated as I binged read it while snuggling under a fluffly quilt and my ac is on full blast! It's always hard to find good novel in the Orginal section but I think that this one is a diamond in the rough for sure! Give it a try!

A friend told me to read this and by far it’s actually pretty good. Aside from the occasional bread slappin its pretty enjoyable to read. Especially because the story has those kind of brotherhood lives ya know? Besides, the friendship of two monsters being together and such is pretty intriguing.

Nice story keep it up boi! The story is very unique but it's not for me. In a critic point of view, it was very nice. Keep it coming. Continue writing this story!!

I will just say one word... THIS NOVEL IN AMAZING just do not quit halfway ..it is 100 time better then many top 20 novel...even top 10 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 I think i said too much

Mehehehehehe, justice warrior strikes once more. Writing Quality 4/5 Good good, only peeve I have is the multiple usage of "???" on some of the occasions when reading. One is okay. Stability 5/5 "Better than mine." Mostly consistent and some of the breaks in the table of contents are compensated. Story Development 4/5 Story is good, thumbs up. No stereotypical themes and such. Character Design 3/5 This rating is kind of influenced by the story development. Kind of strange to include he's kind of bipolar. You kind of know what you're in for with his dark past and it's one sided. Maybe add like "My life is sh*t, but at least its not _____" World Background 3/5 I've only found small snippets of the world he is currently in but that's it, like the measure of power and some names included of some elitist group or something. Also anti Bee men is such a strange term. NOTE This is a review based only around 11 chapters. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Hope the author doesn't check the reply to this review

Once you get past the weirdness, of the MC's new form, and the little grammar mistakes, the story is quite good. His past is so sad, though. Though the new form is weird, it also makes this novel unique. I like the story so far and I'm looking forward to future chapters. View More

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Damn it good but what is with all the quotations in the synopsis 14014014014014014014014014014014014014014014014014014014014014014014014014

Errors (which are inevitable) aside, the concept is good and the story has a pretty nice flow. A good casual read on the sides when you run out of SS to spend on premium novels.