RomanMarch

trash

I just copied your writing in the novel. Yikes, can't recognize your own work?

aww someone's feminity is threatened 🥲 Big girl nweed her bwinky?

I found it for you

Coincidentally right after the free chapters end.

They wasted 50 chapters. Those first 50 are the most crucial for readers. Strong start but with large info dumps, not using the system, not setting a realistic goal or expectation, not having any kind of adversity through it.... The dude became OP without working for OP. Weak to strong is a hit and miss genre, you do it well or you don't..

you gave him a house, but you couldn't give him a spell... you act like you're not the one writing this

Just wanted you to personally read my feedback. deleted after. You're a great writer, and I'm personally a nobody with cash. I just gave you my opinion. You have dedication and talent. Thank You

I swore this book said no romance

Was reading this story but definitely dropping it now because of this comment.