Item: Mr.Bee Violinist
Rating: 3.8
Author: Love_Doc

Love_DocLv26yr

2018-08-12 03:03

While the writing needed a bit of improvement on the side It's still a very nice novel to read. It has good characters and the emotions shown on the characters are quite good. Although there might be some downs to this novel compared to other novels it's still good. The MC has a really good twisted past so that's definitely a plus from me. I'll definitely comeback in the future once in a while to check on things after i read some of my other novels.

Mr.Bee Violinist

KoejiSllycc

4.5

5 Chs

Liked by 5 people

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Doge3569Lv2

I second on that XD XD XD

6yr

KoejiSllyccAuthor

Thanks for the comment!

6yr

Other Reviews

KoejiSllyccAuthor

I hope you guys could leave comments below and give advice to further improve the story. You guys could also suggest thing to be added into the story. Critiques are extremely welcomed here. If there are grammar errors or need work areas please comment down so that i can fix them immediately. -Slyc

6yr

Doge3569Lv2

The writing quality is occasionally inconsistent throughout the chapters. It might be great occasionally but it occasionally might be slightly bad because of some grammatical errors and sentence confusions. The stability of updates has yet to be determined because he has only posted a couple of chapter in a day but it seems to be quite good. Story development is gonna get sick bc I'm calling it XD. Also the main character has a bit of an inconsistency in personality. Might be good to some people might be not as well. The main character offs between loser and hero on and off throughout the first few chapters. Prob focus on that. For the world background try adding a slightly dystopian like world based on the medieval age and a mix of Japanese culture in it. Looking forward to the future of your novel. Salutations from this mister.

6yr

Itz_MinhLv13

it's a good story. the story starts off pretty well in my opinion. I haven't got bored of it, so that good. All in all, I have no oppositions with rating this a 5 star review.

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Cool story bro...ughhh....what was I planning to say again? definitely isn't something like EXP...hmmm.....ahh yes, I'll just go with "Ain't that bad at all!" cool...now i'm going to dive back down into the murky water that is the comment section.

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