Martial God Asura Rebirth

I just ported this from another of my accounts. I am going to write this in my own rhythm so do expect changes to MC's personality. I do welcome any suggestions and critique. My MC brings his modern outlook into this traditional world so expect some new developments on that front. Chu Feng will be OP for a while but that gets streamlined later. I hope you enjoy this as much I do writing it.

This book is like a breadth of fresh air...I stopped reading MGA after Chu Feng became 8 ranked exalted realm cultivator...I always thought how will a good MGA fanfic be like...and by reading this book, I can say that it will be like this... The author has started the fic from chapter 4350~ which is very close to the raw version...which is interesting. The english is good...the writing is easy to understand... The story is very satisfying but the chapters are a bit small considering it a wuxia fanfic ...but I don't have any problem with that. I am looking forward to what is going to happen in the upcoming future. My support is with you.

You know what I say read this novel I recommended it’s really good that’s all you need to know trust me. Writing Quality: good Updating Stability: really good Story Development: good but we will se later on the way Character Design: that’s your opinion but me it’s good world background: same as martial god Asura but author said as the story develops more he’ll go different path then og chun feng

Alright, I am back with yet another detailed review for a worthy novel. Before we began with the stats, I would first like to explain what is going on within the novel. The story takes place far from the beginning of the original novel, 30 chapters before the current raw translation, meaning that many things have already been established, many connections have already been made and Mc has a high level of cultivation. He also asked for a few wishes which are pretty useful so to say. Now I know that people like to read fanfictions which start from the very beginning rather than starting in the middle of the original novel. I am one of those guys but that doesn't mean that I wouldn't give the novel a chance, I am happy that my decision to do so paid off. The story is easy to understand and is very entertaining. The Mc seems to have a good head with decent intelligence, he isn't arrogant or beta rather walks on a fine line between them. The thing that I like the most about this fanfiction is that the Mc doesn't go on sharing his goddamn resources with others or engage in pointless romance, the current chapters focus of his character-building rather than establishing unsubstantial romance. Mc also doesn't seem like the kind who is, "You offend me and I will eradicate your entire family bullshit!". Overall, this is a good MGA fanfic, though the pace of the novel is quite fast, not unbearably so, of course. With the basic introduction out of the way, it's time for us to move towards stats. World-Building:-4.2/5 There isn't much of world-building as of yet, rightfully because of the fast pace of the novel but it still paints the picture for you. My suggestion, the author should try to take the plot a bit slow and try to discover the existing world. Character-Design:-4/5 The novel mainly focusses on Mc so there is not much of character building for the side-characters which is understandable since the novel doesn't have many chapters as of yet. My suggestion, the author should try to write a few chapters from the side-characters perspective, to add more substance. Mc is someone with decent intelligence, has a dominating personality, can be ruthless when needs to be. My suggestion, when he entered the bigger world, make him a bit cautious and focus more on increasing his strength. Update quality:-6/5 This author is a mad-man when it comes to uploading, my suggestion, make sure not to burn yourself out and take it slow if you need to. Writing Quality:-4/5 Not too good, not too bad, basic errors are there but overall it is quite easy to understand the chapters, the construction of the paragraphs are good, though the author has a long way to go in the quality section of the writing. I am satisfied with the quality and you will be too. Overall:-4.3/5 One of the best MGA fanfic of this site, should surely give it a try, I had my own thoughts about the novel but its good till now and I believe the quality is consistent. That's it for now, it been a few years since I last read MGA so I have forgotten most of the things but I hope you get the idea from my review. Peace~

Now, this isn't your usual review but more of a warning. Basically unless your mega fanatic of the series and read basically around 4500 chapters, then give up this story is not for you. Most fanfics start at a point that even the more casual readers can follow then holds your hands slowly guiding you through the story, this does not instead it throw you in at the deep end, and while not exactly a bad thing, it does limit the target audience to basically only a handful of people on this site. Personally, that leaves me at least 4000 chapters behind where I need to be to follow the story. Hence I've had to give up, a shame considering how well written it seems but I assume the author was aware that many couldn't keep up. So my only complaint is I feel the Synopsis should mention this fact. Since if you click to read, chapter 1 will leave you feeling very confused. The chapters before it may hint at it but never outright says it from what I read. I guess many people would just skip those anyway since not everyone checks or reads the chapters in volume 0. I tend to skim the titles myself and only go to them if they seem important or necessary.

a very good idea, it would make a better story if you improved the writing a bit and dropped the POVS, something most people don't like because it adds too much detail and ends up confusing who the protagonist really is. in addition to preventing you from acclimating yourself with the protagonist, just keep like most Chinese novels, a POV that is a mixture of 1st and 3rd person, where sometimes the thoughts of some extras that will be important to the story are shown

um dropped? if dropped i dont read so answer pls

I like MGA even though I stop reading at +4000 chaps. but I was waiting for fanfictions, and there's a lot but most of them are dropped and the others are slow to update. I just hope that this ff is good

Honestly like this a lot and it finally started picking up on updates, just hope it keeps going. I like the changes author introduced it makes it more interesting.

I've only read around 300 chapters of this trash novel before dropping. Seems I can't read this because it starts from 4k+ chapters. :(( I've only read around 300 chapters of this trash novel before dropping. Seems I can't read this because it starts from 4k+ chapters. :((

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Great. The porting went fine and the pace of the story is going well. The next few chapters are going to be exiting with new content and characters.

In reference to the original, the fanfic starts from around 4405th chapter. The author is gradually bit by bit changing the storyline flow and making it his own but that hasn't begun yet. I hope the updates are fast and thanks for an MGA fanfic. I just wanted to ask why author dropped a fanfic which begins from the beginning of the story? I guess some things needed to be happened and only then changed because chu xuanyuan was guiding chu feng all along. Keep up the good work.

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idk why ppl liked this novel this is almost same as original nothing special i hoped chu feng will be mercilessly but he doesn't nothing special dont waste your time

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