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In the Three Kingdoms with a System!

Tianlong was a historian, who was killed by an evil spirit that escaped the spirit road and brought five evil spirits, with it. So come, follow Tianlong on a journey as he travels, in the Three Kingdoms making a name for himself, while tracking down an evil spirit which escaped into the Three Kingdoms. (PS, This is my first time writing a story like this and would like good, bad, and positive criticization, to see what I could fix in the story. Help is always appreciated, also this is an alternate timeline where it follows a slightly altered history of the three kingdoms and shall show another possibility if Lu Bu made a decision, to set up somewhere else where he could grow, contest, and vie for power with Cao Cao, Liu Bei, and Sun Ce.) The ranks of the generals are inspired by the novel, My, Father, In-Law Is Lu Bu. you can get a clear description of them there than here. https://imgur.com/gallery/TcMfSPM not my pic can be found here

dragonflamemperor · Krieg
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Chapter.32 The Rights Victory

When the surrounding soldiers heard that voice, they turned to see their general lying dead with ten other people and stood silently before dropping their weapons and lifted their hands and shouted WE SURRENDER!!!

Tianlong: you won't be treated wrong all we ask is that you listen!!

Soon Tianlong with 100 cavalry rode to the central battlefield where a bloody fight was going on and yelled out ALL ENEMY SOLDIERS YOUR GENERAL HAS BEEN KILLED YOU CAN EITHER SURRENDER OR JOIN HIM!!!! YOU SHALL NOT BE TREATED WRONG IF YOU SURRENDER!!!!

Enemy Captain DON'T LISTEN TO HIS RAMBLING WE SHALL PERSIST TILL THE END!!!

Soldiers: how can we know if he's dead!? We all have a life and don't want to die for a simple rebellion!!

But to show them proof Tianlong brought 20 soldiers that were captured and asked them to convince their brothers.

Soldier: BROTHERS LISTEN OUR GENERAL HAS BEEN KILLED WE HAVE NO REASON TO FIGHT IF WE SURRENDER, WE WON'T BE TREATED WRONGLY!!! WE CAN GO HOME WITHOUT LEAVING OUR FAMILIES WITH DEAD CHILDREN, SIBLINGS OR HUSBANDS SO SURRENDER FOR THEM BROTHERS!!!!

when the soldiers said that the entire battlefield went silent before on after another sounded out saying we surrender

Tianlong: EVERY ONE TODAY WHETHER IT BE US OR OUR CAPTIVES WE HAVE WON A BATTLE WHERE WE HAVE AVOIDED DEATH SO BE PROUD THAT MANY OF US CAN GO HOME TO OUR WIVES, SIBLINGS OR MOTHERERS!!!!!

with that speech, the entire right sounded out with cheers which were heard from the center and left battlefields which made them look to see two armies cheering which made them confused.

Lu Bu: someone!! send word to the right and ask what has happened!!!!