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In Marvel, let's see how it goes

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Smart MC, does whatever it takes. Name: Vinal M William Mental age: 34 Physical age: 15 Backstory: He was a scientist in his past life. Who was always a  fan of marvel cause of there technology and futuristic thinking. So, he wanted that technology to be real. So, he tried to create them himself. And he succeeded making a few, using three-3d printers and sold them for a reasonable price making him some money. Another thing about vinal is that he liked to research blueprints from marvel. But he made a mistake once trying to make the super soldier serum. And when it was to late. He knew messed up....

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thehater
thehaterLv2thehater

trash just trash

Little_El
Little_ElLv3Little_El

The general idea is great but the story is not developed enough, everything is going too fast and it spoils the narration. It leaves me on an unfulfilled hunger. I hope history will be rewritten someday . I can't wait to read more 💙

Biscuit_willieon
Biscuit_willieonLv14Biscuit_willieon

I love the plot and the story you are getting too. But in my own personal opinion the background indicator to development. It's kind of stiff to be honest we all focus on the MC but no other mentions of the other pother paws of point of view's of views of the other Marvel characters. And by that being said I have a little bit itching is to say Is the story going too fast the main fanfiction of your story not focusing enough on the details of the story and making the beginning a little confusing because of the details you gave what the story began above. In simple terms the main character does not have a main goal. The plot is confusing because we only see the main character's point of view not others like bodusa or Lucia or The Avengers about something growing in simple terms doesn't have that much detail detail or anything about the emotions of the characters happening in their own world and that is wanted to tell you about it. So yeah that's what I wanted to say to you for why English toy much more better yeah.

Angry_Reviewer
Angry_ReviewerLv12Angry_Reviewer

The grammar is abysmal. Sentences are incomplete or run on, no in between. The plot jumps around without any context. Overall completely unreadable trash.

dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

well the story is good, but it seems a little cold, a bit like a narration a dissertation, it doesn't feel like something that is being experienced, it goes like it was just a thing, an outline, the idea of ​​the story is good, but it is this, it gives the impression of a sketch and not of a story properly constructed with its details, it does not allow us to experience and understand the character, it does not seem as if it were him living something real in his life, it was a little weird.

PowerStorm
PowerStormAutorPowerStorm

Normally, it is an Honor and a Shame to give myself a Rating, but I will do it, for myself, and for all those other authors who do too[img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp]

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