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I have the impression that it would be interesting to make connections between this world and that of the witcher and warcraft and Diablo, all of these worlds have things that make travel between different dimensions plausible, not to mention that it would make the story more diverse, both in characters and creatures, and finally the general scenario is similar, fights with swords and magic.
Good story, and in the comics a world like this has already been shown, if I'm not mistaken, it's cool to see a story based on things outside of the UCM. Can mc receive bloodlines? If so, I recommend Aragorn's, it gives you longer life and a better physique, the MC could be considered an ancient human, there are also the characteristics of humans from One Piece, who through training and the right diet can have bodies capable of destroying mountains or the resistance to fight for several days in a row, the Senju and Uchika lineage, one to improve the body and the other the mind, along with some basic techniques and the Chakra refinement technique, the lineage of Harry Potter's wizards, all these things are from human beings, would increase the MC's potential, without ruining the story, as they require time to learn, control, and improve. There are things like the Ravenclaw lineage of night angel that gives almost immortality, or other human abilities, even the super soldier serum is to improve depending on the genetic potential, if the mc receives things only based on humans from various worlds he can still become very powerful and through scientific improvement or magical rituals, capable of fighting even entities in the future.
Leave Isey to Ryas, he is very problematic, unless the red dragon can be traded from him, like sending some power or items to make an exchange, he would be more useful to the mc as a teacher, not to mention that the armor is powerful and cool in addition to being able to absorb other weapons and powers, like he did with Escalon the sword and the white dragon's power orb. Harry Potter's magic is very metaphysical, the classes created are just to condition the mind, not to mention that it doesn't lack mana, it just depends on how strong the core becomes over time naturally or with the help of rituals, now the big advantage is that it requires will, feelings and determination, but there is no such thing as running out of mana, just the fatigue of the mental effort to maintain focus and other things, Mc's mental power gives him a great advantage, and it won't be like others in Marvel, depending on pider loans from beings from other dimensions.
But besides his different appearance, MC doesn't speak the Pakistani language, wouldn't it be better to say that he is a Chinese tourist? Even because China in history is an ally country?
Congratulations, translator, if more people did a good job like this we would have many more good works to read, free from poison, xenophobia, racism or excessive patriotism almost to the point of brainwashing or seeming like propaganda.
Okay, well, in real Marvel, this is very plausible.
Is it an original story? If not, what is the name of the original?
Author friend, can you give MC the power to travel between worlds that have vampires? type for him to absorb blood and different abilities, even if he doesn't get everything, especially from creative versions like Alucard, Dracula, The Covirnos, Originals, Cain, the Twilight Ones, among others, see I'm talking about absorbing only part of the excence of each branch of these different vampires, even hybrid versions like those with werewolf blood, so the mc can over time become a true ancestor for this new race, one in which the members would have varied talents depending on what They inherited from MC and their different origin powers.
I recommend selecting a leader and vice leader, then department leaders, such as the space sector, logistics, battle troops, one leader for each, army, navy and aeronautics, and space. this is important.
The best thing is to be honest: "I'm immortal and powerful and I want to have a big family, especially wives or even girlfriends or just colorful friendships. I'll be honest with all of you, I have deep feelings for all of you, but I'm willing to respect your decisions, if we start a romantic relationship I don't want jealousy or senseless fights. I know it may seem selfish, especially because I don't accept a wife or girlfriend of mine being with others, but that's how I feel and how I want my life on the sentimental and family side.