Writing Quality:
Very good I liked how the story is proceeding so far, with Aemon (Main Protagonist) who is someone from our world and Rhaenyra who is Aqua from the Oshi No Ko world mix together. it's like a pineapple and pizza, it doesn't sound good but it is pretty good. I like their dynamic and their development as character especially Aemons, he isn't someone perfect, albeit a perfect warrior, but isn't as smart as his sister. I felt like each time the characters appear it makes me want to keep reading due to this. Also I like how you use chatGPT to fix your grammar and not use it to fill up your sentences.
Story Development:
So far, we are following cannon, but from what the author is saying it will diverge and it has diverge, since by the time I'm writing this 15 chapters isn't enough to give me a good review for development in terms of pace. But I like how it is going for now, but I do wish for it to move a bit slow, and I feel like we aren't given enough depth in regards to Aemon and Rhaenyra actions as a whole. It doesn't sounds important, but I feel like it gives more life to our character if we see them hanging out more with friends and their family to see more of that dynamic and background to the story. I hope you do improve on that, but I like how its going so far.
Character Design:
He has their character designs and I like them so far, I like to imagine the others as their actors in the actual show.
Updating Stability:
Updates 2 to 4 Chapters a week and is very consistent so far.
World Background:
Its House of The Dragons, a lot of people wouldn't know the world without reading Fire and Blood or look into the history of House Targaryen. But I believe they know as when reading the title they should have a bit of background in knowing the ASOIAF universe and if not this is a good place to start because what got me into ASOIAF was fanfiction.
Conclusion:
I really enjoy the story so far, I just wished we had more depth in Aemon and Rhaenyra lives since I feel we skimmed that a lot throughout the story, I would like if you could improve on that. Other than that, I really enjoy it.
