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  • yato_med
    yato_med17h
    Replied to Negan_5785

    I know it's stupid to compare characters with different power systems and from different worlds, but for God's sake, how can Mihawk face the genjutsu? , and what can he do against Susano, and that's just Madra without Hashirama cells and without Renigan.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Template System
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    Naruto: Mihawk Template
    Anime & Comics · plotplanner
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  • yato_med
    yato_med1d
    Commented

    Question for the author Do you imagine yourself in the place of the main character? Is this the reason for your exaggeration in describing how wonderful the main character is? Because if this is the case, then I am sorry to tell you that you started this work from a very wrong foundation.... You should know that a good writer deals with the world of the novel as a chessboard and God moves the pieces in a way that serves the general story and never obeys himself in the place of a character he created or even sympathizes with it because if he does and unconsciously he will start ignoring the story and make the world revolve around that character and before he realizes that the plot will be disintegrated and things will get out of control end If you try to put things back in their place, you will have created a large number of gaps and paradoxes (English is not my first language )

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Enrollment
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    Naruto: Mihawk Template
    Anime & Comics · plotplanner
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  • yato_med
    yato_med1d
    Commented

    Can you stop mentioning how strong your enemies are and instead tell us something useful like MC age? , what year it is?,.....

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Template System
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    Naruto: Mihawk Template
    Anime & Comics · plotplanner
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  • yato_med
    yato_med7d
    Replied to World_of_Songs

    The complaint is not from copying movies or claiming that it is his creation, but I don't like how he brags about that when he talks to himself Meaning when the talk is directed to us

    Ch 1 HWI 1
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    Hollywood What If
    Movies · pujimaki
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  • yato_med
    yato_med11d
    Commented

    Why do you sacrifice anything in the first place, you already have a system

    Ch 1 Moving on
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    In Danmachi with A Jujutsu Kaisen System
    Anime & Comics · Zekt
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  • yato_med
    yato_med11d
    Posted

    I do not read any novel less than 50 chapters, So I'm going to add it to my library for now. And until I read it I will give you 5 stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 for no harem

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    House of the Dragon: Stars of the Realm.
    TV · Evilmoon
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  • yato_med
    yato_med12d
    Commented

    Do you have any idea how the novels work!? where is the description and the character's structure? where are the conversations? where is the pov of the rest of the characters?

    Ch 3 Chapter 2
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    Mercenary (Asoiaf)
    Book&Literature · Ash_D_Born
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  • yato_med
    yato_med13d
    Replied to Nildred

    Seriously, I don't remember. And since I am not a picky person there must be a really good reason for writing this comment

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: The Hall of Stars, the Lamp Genie, and the Fallen Mother Goddess
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    Lord of Mysteries: The Stars Return
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  • yato_med
    yato_med14d
    Posted

    I the only one who finds this shit so confusing? why do you have to incorporate several worlds into your novel, didn't anyone tell you that it's a bad idea and never works? At least I've never seen a novel that contains several worlds, whether MC moves between them or they merge into one world and it works. You may find some encouragement at first, but quickly the readers will get bored and start complaining about the complexity of the story and the many temptations and mistakes that you will undoubtedly make (English is not my first language )

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    The Overlord of Mysteries
    Anime & Comics · ChaosVoid_24
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  • yato_med
    yato_med16d
    Replied to yato_med

    I take back my word My grandmother who is in her nineties and suffers from Alzheimer's and dementia, is smarter than the MC

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: The Hall of Stars, the Lamp Genie, and the Fallen Mother Goddess
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    Lord of Mysteries: The Stars Return
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  • yato_med
    yato_med18d
    Commented

    Will Mc ever stop blaming Zetsu for everything bad that happens?

    Ch 31 No title
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    Naruto: Back in Ancient Times
    Anime & Comics · Josh_Richie
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  • yato_med
    yato_med18d
    Commented

    Anyone in Veceres' place will do the same thing, it's the only option available, Either saving the baby and losing the mother or losing the baby. and the mother .

    Ch 6 Court
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    Doctor in ASOIAF
    Book&Literature · DaoistWDfd8h
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  • yato_med
    yato_med22d
    Commented

    For a Chinese novel, it seems that this MC has some brain cells.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: The Hall of Stars, the Lamp Genie, and the Fallen Mother Goddess
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    Lord of Mysteries: The Stars Return
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  • yato_med
    yato_med23d
    Replied to Fellow_Daoist_John

    What do you expect from the Chinese shit

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    Uchiha con Anteojos
    Anime & Comics · JNovelasFanFicti
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  • yato_med
    yato_med23d
    Commented

    Unexpectedly, this was very good

    Ch 11 Chapter 11 : Peace of Mind??
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    Naruto : Sequence 0 Visionary
    Anime & Comics · Nobody2NoBody
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  • yato_med
    yato_med25d
    Commented

    I don't know why you had to be creative about reincarnation, You already have a great scenario that works successfully, you die, you find yourself in a new world, the system wakes up and here you are.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
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    HOTD: Aerion Targaryen
    TV · MrGood23
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  • yato_med
    yato_med25d
    Commented

    It is true that Emma is a merciful and passionate queen but also smart and she will not suggest to the king anything that might anger the lords of Westeros and the followers of the seven fanatics, especially since everyone still remembers what happened with the Major the cruel

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 Aerion Targaryen
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    HOTD: Aerion Targaryen
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  • yato_med
    yato_med26d
    Commented

    Danzo must get away with it ، It's too early for him to die, and without him Orchimaru wouldn't be Orchimaru, Aktsuki wouldn't come into being, Sakumo would live, and Hokage might become. In short, if Danzo dies, MC future information becomes useless. Although some may think that he doesn't need that information with his power, let me remind you that Hashirama, Yagami Uchiha, and Patriarch Azumaki were stronger than him, and yet they died young ، So I think in order to keep the novel realistic, Mc must move from direct bloody fighting to political and information fighting. (English is not my first language )

    Ch 73 Chapter 73 Village
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • yato_med
    yato_med26d
    Commented

    Why in heaven's name kill him, isn't it better to arrest him and use him as a hostage or a bargaining chip in negotiations or even get the Peugeot monster from him and increase his power؟؟

    Ch 64 Chapter 64 Conclusion
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • yato_med
    yato_med26d
    Replied to Abayomi_Atoyegbe

    Yes, it is😂😂😂

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    Naruto: teaching disciples for ten thousand times the Reward
    Anime & Comics · Ahmed_Riaz
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