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I know it's stupid to compare characters with different power systems and from different worlds, but for God's sake, how can Mihawk face the genjutsu? , and what can he do against Susano, and that's just Madra without Hashirama cells and without Renigan.
Question for the author Do you imagine yourself in the place of the main character? Is this the reason for your exaggeration in describing how wonderful the main character is? Because if this is the case, then I am sorry to tell you that you started this work from a very wrong foundation.... You should know that a good writer deals with the world of the novel as a chessboard and God moves the pieces in a way that serves the general story and never obeys himself in the place of a character he created or even sympathizes with it because if he does and unconsciously he will start ignoring the story and make the world revolve around that character and before he realizes that the plot will be disintegrated and things will get out of control end If you try to put things back in their place, you will have created a large number of gaps and paradoxes (English is not my first language )
I the only one who finds this shit so confusing? why do you have to incorporate several worlds into your novel, didn't anyone tell you that it's a bad idea and never works? At least I've never seen a novel that contains several worlds, whether MC moves between them or they merge into one world and it works. You may find some encouragement at first, but quickly the readers will get bored and start complaining about the complexity of the story and the many temptations and mistakes that you will undoubtedly make (English is not my first language )
It is true that Emma is a merciful and passionate queen but also smart and she will not suggest to the king anything that might anger the lords of Westeros and the followers of the seven fanatics, especially since everyone still remembers what happened with the Major the cruel
Danzo must get away with it ، It's too early for him to die, and without him Orchimaru wouldn't be Orchimaru, Aktsuki wouldn't come into being, Sakumo would live, and Hokage might become. In short, if Danzo dies, MC future information becomes useless. Although some may think that he doesn't need that information with his power, let me remind you that Hashirama, Yagami Uchiha, and Patriarch Azumaki were stronger than him, and yet they died young ، So I think in order to keep the novel realistic, Mc must move from direct bloody fighting to political and information fighting. (English is not my first language )