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I just conducted an in-depth search and couldn't find any official source confirming either my or your perspective. The unofficial sources are contradictory, with most stating he is 4 or 7 years older than Kakashi, while others say they are the same age or even that he is younger. Even the official sources, such as the manga and Kishimoto's statements, are inconsistent and illogical in many of the flashback details. I think this leaves room for the author to interpret as they wish in this gray area. However, I still believe that he should be older, or when he dies, he would be around fifteen, which is a very young age for someone who carries deep thoughts and philosophy that had a significant impact on Itachi.
Let me ask you, what is Shisui title and where did he get it from?
Shisui Born two years before Kakashi, and he earned his reputation as one of the most talented and powerful shinobi of his generation During his participation in the third war and there he got his Mangekyō, Itachi was seven years old at the time.
A very exaggerated reaction for someone I've known for months, and also it's an adult. Why does he act like a child?
chapters are ridiculously short
Indeed, if he had asked the Atsutski dynasty, it would have been more useful.
My interest is starting to fade. Also, if you don’t know something, do some research. For example, Nagato didn’t awaken the Rinnegan himself—it was actually Madara’s eyes, which he implanted in Nagato before his death.
Lina's part wasn't necessary and very cliché.
This chapter was perfect, why isn't this great novel famous?
You need to find a way to remove it—it feels out of place for a male character. Additionally, you should provide more background on Rex and MC goals, making their motivations clearer and more compelling. Their interactions with other characters need to be expanded, but in a balanced way—enough to develop relationships naturally without overdoing it. Finally, consider introducing another point of view to add depth to the narrative. A well-placed perspective shift can enhance storytelling by offering new insights and enriching the overall experience.