oh usually i'm not this early, but let's review this. as usual, the good, the bad, the meh.
the good:
1. the grammar is quite good, at least, compared to the rest of the novels in this app.
2. it's dance of the dragons fanfic, though if we see MC's circumstances, i imagine that it'll be quite different.
3. the author did his research on the world, and tries to make the character as accurate as possible, though there's some off things here and there that we'll talk about below.
4. The MC isn't that OP, he just some enhancements on his senses, and the author teased that he can do a bit of runic magic as well. i just hope that the mc will have obstacles instead of everything going too well for him like that other HotD fanfic last week...
the meh:
1. i don't quite like the start. How Daemon could somehow "get along" with Rhea is a bit off for me, though I guess that's the whole point.
2. i don't really like the 1st POV style to be honest, I like it more when the author writes on 3rd POV, but I guess the 1st pov has its charm.
bad:
1. to be honest, i don't really have a huge complain, although there's one that bothers me the most. the MC said that he wants to have freedom, but I don't see what kind of freedom does he want. does he wants to do whatever he wants? or simply that no one bothers him? idk author doesn't explain it very wel, but it's quite early, maybe he'll explain it later.
overall, a really good fanfic to be honest, for me anyways, it's a good start
