Great story to read please support aithor to continue and pls do t drop story we need stories like yhis

Pretty dang enjoyable thus far. Author is cerebral in his approach, espicially when it comes to the essence of his main character. I enjoy the dialogue and feel many of the OG characters have their original voice. There has been some interesting set up in these early chapters. It’s an easy read. Check it out

THIS NOVEL DECLARES ITSELF MARVELOUS. You know when I am reading a review in webnovel it's the generic it's good, I need more and so on. But they will not do justice to this novel, the novel till now is at its 8th chapter and I am hooked. The characters feel...... Alive if you know what I mean. The boy with his not yet declared powers is bound to be a strong-arm but will he be as strong in mind too? that is yet to be seen and oh boy am I excited to read more of this.. Those who don't buy power stones get one power stone a day.. and I declare my wealth of 1 ps to this novel till this novel approaches it's (will be) marvellous end. Thank you dear author.

Horrible the mc is a sissy and the author doesn’t even consider the choice that he makes for his characters

We are almost 40 chapters in time to reflect. It started out good. When the story was focused on Meagar it had some good moments. In the latest chapters we are coming back to canon events (tv show) and we see Meagar life had zero impact whatsoever. It is more like telling a another fake history at this point. And you already know how the story ends.

was good in early chapters but author is way too high up to realize his baloney. there're comments explaining MC's decision is flawed both logically and politically. But author is like, webnovel people are stupid. well if there's no change in cannon what's the point of this story even. anyways, out of sight out of mind bye.

oh usually i'm not this early, but let's review this. as usual, the good, the bad, the meh. the good: 1. the grammar is quite good, at least, compared to the rest of the novels in this app. 2. it's dance of the dragons fanfic, though if we see MC's circumstances, i imagine that it'll be quite different. 3. the author did his research on the world, and tries to make the character as accurate as possible, though there's some off things here and there that we'll talk about below. 4. The MC isn't that OP, he just some enhancements on his senses, and the author teased that he can do a bit of runic magic as well. i just hope that the mc will have obstacles instead of everything going too well for him like that other HotD fanfic last week... the meh: 1. i don't quite like the start. How Daemon could somehow "get along" with Rhea is a bit off for me, though I guess that's the whole point. 2. i don't really like the 1st POV style to be honest, I like it more when the author writes on 3rd POV, but I guess the 1st pov has its charm. bad: 1. to be honest, i don't really have a huge complain, although there's one that bothers me the most. the MC said that he wants to have freedom, but I don't see what kind of freedom does he want. does he wants to do whatever he wants? or simply that no one bothers him? idk author doesn't explain it very wel, but it's quite early, maybe he'll explain it later. overall, a really good fanfic to be honest, for me anyways, it's a good start

one the best works of early dev. fanfiction I've ever read

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