Game of Thrones: Auron Blackfyre's Tale

Good story but minus 2 stars for two reasons. 1. he stuck his finger in his *ss for a prank. unacceptable for any reason. minus 1 star. 2. Hes gay. evidence below. minus 1 star. . . . evidence: Please refer to the first reason. Very justified having to swallow such poor humor and trying to forget it ever happened without tainting the rest of the story.

The author is a beginner, but even so the story has maintained a balance, the author himself said that he doesn't have much knowledge of the books and TV series, but he decided to venture out, so small errors or things different from the originals can happen, but nothing that spoils the story or cannot be edited later. I liked that the golden finger wasn't something exaggerated, I hope he continues the good work, I wish him and all of us blessings.

Nothing has really happened so far, no plot progression at all, so its hella slow paced, writing is meh, but the author says english isnt his first language so that can be forgiven, updating stability is good, characters are bland, and the humor is pretty juvenile, hopefully that changes. World background hasnt rlly come into play yet so🤷‍♂️

This is mc is the most disgusting character that I have ever read

A good story being told, that's what I found here, keep it up writer and don't get attached to the small negative criticisms.

Writing quality is above average for WN, although there are some grammar issues it's not too distracting. Story is quite slow paced, that's not a bad thing, but just something to be aware of. The reason for the 3/5 is the protagonist. I just can't find him likeable or relatable at all, I think he must have ran a prank channel before he was reincarnated. His behaviour has already had tragic consequences, with his servant getting beaten and repped, and he continues with stuff like putting his finger in his aas and smearing it on another guy's face... Yeah it's meant to be comedy, but it's just too juvenile. It's a shame, because if it weren't for his attitude, I'm sure I'd enjoy it, but as is, I just can't.

don't drop please l have been hooked by ur nobel

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I dislike this mc very much it’s like he doesn’t have a character set in stone it just fluctuates. Not my cup of tea but good luck to the author.

this MC is sooooo ..........................................................................................................................................................

Really promising so far. I'm glad it isn't just another copy and paste Jon snow/random martel fic. The writing and grammar is good and the update stability is good as well.

ch 1-25 review- I have to say I really like the story it's got a little bit of everything with that being said the only very minor gripe I have is the character descriptions they're kind of short and you really don't truly know what the OCS look like. I'm hoping the author will do a better character description or put a picture in and say this guy/girl with whatever changes to make to fit what ever he has in mind. By the way I think it would be hilarious if you had Harley(Dc Comics) show up even if it was just for a gag. Why because for some reason I think Harley in Game of Thrones would just be hella funny. 😁

The author is confused about how to write pretending and failing. It hurts to read them.

I love it, 8 chapters in and its unique & ubiq. I don't care about the specifics, and we have not really explored much of the story, but the writing o far is good, and I hope it stays good

Can u title ur chapters…also plot is very slow

This is a masterpiece don't ruin it as a reader I can rank it in my top 3 for asoif genre and I read more than my fare share keep it up………………… ………………… ………………… ………………… ………………… ………………… ………………… ………………… ………………… ………………… ………………… ………………… ………………… ………………… …………………

A good story being told, that's what I found here, keep it up writer and don't get attached to the small negative criticisms. _______________________________

Why is this 4.38 stars, pathetic it should be 5 stars, me like so you got my power stones friend muaaahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahhahahahahaha.

So far so good. A new way to blend the system into ASOIAF and executed well so far. Hope you can keep a regular update.

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