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literl010
literl010Lv18mth
2024-04-26 11:50

Writing quality is above average for WN, although there are some grammar issues it's not too distracting. Story is quite slow paced, that's not a bad thing, but just something to be aware of. The reason for the 3/5 is the protagonist. I just can't find him likeable or relatable at all, I think he must have ran a prank channel before he was reincarnated. His behaviour has already had tragic consequences, with his servant getting beaten and repped, and he continues with stuff like putting his finger in his aas and smearing it on another guy's face... Yeah it's meant to be comedy, but it's just too juvenile. It's a shame, because if it weren't for his attitude, I'm sure I'd enjoy it, but as is, I just can't.

Game of Thrones: Auron Blackfyre's Tale

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4.2
43 Chs

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

Good story but minus 2 stars for two reasons. 1. he stuck his finger in his *ss for a prank. unacceptable for any reason. minus 1 star. 2. Hes gay. evidence below. minus 1 star. . . . evidence: Please refer to the first reason. Very justified having to swallow such poor humor and trying to forget it ever happened without tainting the rest of the story.

8mth

dukroger
dukrogerLv6

The author is a beginner, but even so the story has maintained a balance, the author himself said that he doesn't have much knowledge of the books and TV series, but he decided to venture out, so small errors or things different from the originals can happen, but nothing that spoils the story or cannot be edited later. I liked that the golden finger wasn't something exaggerated, I hope he continues the good work, I wish him and all of us blessings.

9mth
ShuYme
ShuYmeLv5

Nothing has really happened so far, no plot progression at all, so its hella slow paced, writing is meh, but the author says english isnt his first language so that can be forgiven, updating stability is good, characters are bland, and the humor is pretty juvenile, hopefully that changes. World background hasnt rlly come into play yet so🤷‍♂️

9mth
Junior_Banks
Junior_BanksLv4

This is mc is the most disgusting character that I have ever read

9mth
Don_Diegow
Don_DiegowLv1

A good story being told, that's what I found here, keep it up writer and don't get attached to the small negative criticisms.

9mth
Efra_Ngari
Efra_NgariLv13

don't drop please l have been hooked by ur nobel

9mth
1stDrunkenImmortal
1stDrunkenImmortalLv14

Reveal spoiler

7mth
firat_Vural
firat_VuralLv13

I dislike this mc very much it’s like he doesn’t have a character set in stone it just fluctuates. Not my cup of tea but good luck to the author.

8mth
mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5

this MC is sooooo ..........................................................................................................................................................

8mth
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