Minor Improvements

"Minzy Ong, despite only being in her mid-30s, is a well-respected producer in the country."

"Contrary to her father's wishes, she didn't stay in Azure Entertainment to work as their sole producer. Instead, she went from company to company or where her talent was needed." 

"In the end, she was able to establish a name for herself outside of her father's achievements."

"You know, you don't have to whisper these things to me when the person we're talking about is literally sitting in front of us," June whispered into Jay's ear. 

The manager shrugged before leaning closer to June, speaking a bit louder this time. 

"I just thought you wanted some information or something. You're pretty clueless about these things," he said. 

June opened his mouth to argue but realized that Jay was right. He didn't have a clue who the woman was when she first entered. He would have also never guessed that she was Mr. Ong's daughter based on how she looked.