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Finishing My Unfinished Dimension

I received an email from the God of Writing to finish an unfinished dimension, I thought it was some kind of scam but I clicked it anyway and was transported into my fan-fic world. Although I couldn't control the changes anymore, I'll control the change as a character in the fan-fic myself. Finishing my Unfinished Dimension(A Better Goku) by going into the dimension myself. Chapter Release rate: When I have a chapter finished, I'll publish right away. Picture Link: https://www,pinterest,ph/pin/148900331416809059/

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Whis

Chapter 23 - Whis

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Planet Yardrat…

Haru and the 3 arrived on the planet and a ton of little aliens with stuff toy like faces surrounded and also some aliens with really like aliens we expect from an alien to look like.

Yamcha commented as they looked at the aliens "So these are Yardratians huh? I've never seen their race before."

Krillin interjected, obviously making fun of Yamcha's comment "Of course, you've never seen them, have you ever been to outer space? No."

The little aliens that surrounded Haru said "Welcome!"

"Thanks for your hospitality! But can you not try to deceive me with those numbers? I don't like being deceived" Haru replied with a smile

The little aliens surprised then turned into one and replied "I see… I'm sorry about that, that was rude of me."

"It's nothing. But thanks to seeing you do that I got an idea of the application of ki."

The little alien asked in confusion "What do you mean?"

"This." Haru used his ki to make himself into two

The three didn't look surprise because in their minds everything is possible with Haru

The little alien replied in surprise "Wow, that surprised me. You have such an amazing talent there."

Haru laughed and replied as he turned himself into one person again "Thanks."

"So? What is your business here?" The little alien shrugged his surprised reaction.

"I'm here for these three's training. Specifically spirit control. I'm sure looking at them you can see their ki's state."

The little alien looked at the three earthlings and replied as he analyzed their ki "I see what you mean. But how did you know we specialize in spirit control?"

"Well… I heard Goku trained here before so I brought them here."

"You know Goku? I see… Come on in and meet the elder." The little alien nodded in understanding as he led them towards the inside of the house to meet the elder.

Inside the house they meet a huge version of the little alien and Yamcha commented "He's huge!"

The huge alien then replied as he shrunk himself "Not really, it's a technique I use. I heard from outside that you know Goku? How is he doing? We're extremely grateful to him for getting rid of the Ginyu force as they caused quite a fuss on our planet."

Krillin then breathed a sigh of relief knowing that they were connected through Goku. "Goku is doing well and has become stronger than ever."

The huge alien from before became small and replied "I see… That's great then."

The little alien then introduced the alien "This is elder Pybara. He's the one who taught Goku about spirit control."

Haru then looked at Pybara and said "Can I trouble you to train these three about spirit control? I'll owe you one."

Elder Pybara looked at Haru and said "A favour from such a great being as yourself? Of course I'll train them, I'd be a fool to not accept a favour from such a simple task."

Haru chuckled and then asked "You know me?"

Elder Pybara shook his head and replied "I don't but I feel the great power you possess."

Haru looked at Pybara in surprise as he asked "You can sense god ki?"

Pybara then replied "To a certain extent… Yes."

Haru nodded and said "Then I'll leave their spirit control training to you. How long can I expect you to be done?"

Pybara looked at Krillin, Yamcha, and Tenshinhan ki state as he touch his chin and said "1 year in earth's time should be enough for them to learn how to control ki properly. Although they have much calmer ki than Goku they don't know how to utilize it properly. For the first 3 months I'll stabilize their ki and then teach them different techniques to utilize their ki in the next 9 months."

Haru nodded in agreement and replied "I see… Then I'll leave it to you."

Haru then looked at Krillin, Yamcha, and Tenshinhan and said "Train well… This will benefit your strength a lot."

They nodded towards Haru seriously as they looked forward to their training and newly obtained strength after that.

"Then I'll be going now. Good luck." Haru smiled at them as he teleported back to Bulma's house.

Bulma's house…

In the terrace a man with ceremonial-like clothing was standing with a staff in hand

Haru looked at Whis in surprise as he didn't expect him to come here. Haru just smiled as he realized that Whis might have sensed his ki before in the lookout and said "To what do I owe this pleasure for? Whis-san."

Whis looked at Haru in surprise as he knew his name "Ho Ho Ho… It's nothing, just a mortal with your strength appearing in the universe 7 was really surprising. So I came to pay you a visit."

"I see… Then I'll show you around. It's a good thing you didn't come at midnight." Haru replied as he called Bulma, he used his ki to whisper to Bulma to come to the terrace

Whis looked amused at Haru's ki application and commented "That's quite an advanced application of ki."

"I know. I learned it myself when I was bored." Haru laughed as he explained its origin.

"You're a genius. No, that's an understatement, it's better to call you a monster at the rate you became strong." Whis commented as he looked at Haru in amusement

Haru just replied as he looked at Whis' power level"I don't like being helpless to do anything at critical moments so I tried to become as strong as possible. But I feel you're still stronger than me by a lot"

Whis: [Power Level: 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000]

"Ho ho ho… That's to be expected, Haru-san. You have reached the limits in ki and physical capacity. The last part is a law to your soul."

Haru analyzed what Whis just said and observed Whis' ki and understood and said "I see… so that's why my strength wouldn't increase no matter what."

Whis laughed again as Haru understood without any explanation whatsoever beside the one hint he said which was the law. "You're really a monster, Haru-san."

Haru laughed and replied "I'll take that as a compliment. Thanks."

Bulma arrived to see Haru talking with Whis and asked "Who is this gentleman? Haru?"

Haru introduced Whis "This is Whis, he is the attendant of the greatest god of this Universe, the god of destruction. Currently, he's 1000x stronger than me."

Bulma blinked and looked at Whis, then at Haru then his face went pale "The attendant of the god of destruction? Is he going to destroy Earth?"

Haru laughed at Bulma's exaggerated thinking and said "No. He's not. He's here to visit me since I became too strong. I'd like to introduce to him the Earth's food. Food out of earth is supposedly just disgusting so he never had good food before."

Whis looked at Haru as his eyes twitched 'The food he eats are disgusting? Is food on earth that good?'

Bulma breathed a sigh of relief and replied "I'll order food as soon as possible."

"Thanks, Bulma."

Whis approached Haru and asked "Is the food here really that delicious?"

Haru laughed at Whis' reaction and replied "If the food that Beerus and Champa compete with are delicious in your terms that's just staple food on earth."

Whis ignored Haru's knowledge of how Haru knew that and focused on the food as his eyes shined "That delicious? Then the earth seems to have some extremely delicious food then. Years ago, this place only had dinosaurs that had no conscious mind so Beerus sama destroyed them all to extinction because it irritated him."

Haru just laughed as he sat down signaling Whis to sit on the other side.

Whis just sat down on the opposite side of Haru waiting for food.

After a while the food arrived, well the pizza…

"Here's the pizza for now, the other food are taking a while to arrive." Bulma said as she was carrying the pizza to the terrace.

Haru then used his ki to get the Pizza in a row, opening it one by one.

Bulma got surprised that what he was holding suddenly lost weight and began floating away but noticed it was Haru "Thanks! Haru!"

Haru then replied "No problem, just call me when you carry something heavy, I don't have the money to pay so just let me carry it hahaha."

Bulma also laughed and got used to Whis as Haru just treated him as a normal friend, typical attitude of hers and said as she sat on the same table as Whis and Haru "Alright. I'll sit here and tell you when the other food arrives so you can get them yourself."

Whis stood up and looked at the row of Pizza one by one "This food is called Pizza?" and asked Haru

"Yup!"

"That's a weird name."

"I don't know why the name is like that but it's delicious. Try it." Haru said as he grabbed a slice of pepperoni Pizza to show Whis how to eat Pizza

Whis looked at Haru and learned from him and also grabbed a slice "Oh my! This really is delicious. The food outside of earth are really disgusting compared to this kind of food."

Haru laughed at Whis' exaggerated reaction and said "There are lots of food that are as delicious or much more delicious than this."

Whis' eyes shined as he reacted "More delicious food than this?"

"Yes! You can ask Bulma to show you around. She has a lot of money to spare." Haru said as he pushed the responsibility of feeding Whis to her

Bulma looked at Haru in annoyance and said "Can you pleas not treat me as your wallet?"

Haru then replied "But it is true. You have more money than you can ever spend in your whole lifetime. Plus you can make a friendly relationship with such a strong person. Isn't it a win-win situation?"

Bulma just sighed as she silently agreed "Just do whatever you want…"

Haru then smiled "Thanks!"

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