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Finishing My Unfinished Dimension

I received an email from the God of Writing to finish an unfinished dimension, I thought it was some kind of scam but I clicked it anyway and was transported into my fan-fic world. Although I couldn't control the changes anymore, I'll control the change as a character in the fan-fic myself. Finishing my Unfinished Dimension(A Better Goku) by going into the dimension myself. Chapter Release rate: When I have a chapter finished, I'll publish right away. Picture Link: https://www,pinterest,ph/pin/148900331416809059/

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Meeting Goku

Chapter 2 - Meeting Goku

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As Haru was flying fast, he didn't know where the direction of the west city was, he didn't know if he was weird or not but he didn't know where the north, south, east, and west direction in the map was.

After flying for a few minutes he saw a village so he discharged his ki and went down into the village.

He approached a man and asked as he smiled "Do you know where the direction of the west city is?"

"I-It's in that direction…" The man was surprised at the flying man but told him what he asked anyway

"Thank you!" Haru said as he floated upwards fast now unlike in the beginning of his ki control.

"Y-You're welcome…" The man replied still in disbelief as he saw him flying "Maybe that was god…"

After flying for 10 minutes, Haru finally reached the west city.

"So this is the city huh… I really can't get used to these bubble houses…" Haru said as he saw the lively west city, bustling with a lot of people going around

"Anyway, the biggest house belongs to Bulma's family so I'll go there." Haru flew to the house of Bulma and saw his mother, Panchy, so he directly flew down and stood in front of her.

"Hello, Is Bulma around?" Haru asked as he smiled

"Oh my… You're so handsome… Are you Bulma's boyfriend? Oh wait, Yamcha is Bulma's boyfriend… Are you her other boyfriend?" Panchy asked without being a bit surprised about Haru who just flew into their house.

Haru chuckled at Panchy's reaction as he wasn't surprised about the fact that he flew but was shocked that her daughter has another boyfriend "I'm not her boyfriend, but I'm about to become her friend."

"I see, that's great for Bulma to have such a handsome friend. How about you come in first and have some cake and tea?" Panchy asked

"I'll have to say no for now, but if the opportunity comes I'll have some of your cake and tea." Haru said with a smile trying not to offend

Panchy looked at him with a bit of disappointment and said "Her friend, Goku, took her away. They said they were going to look for dragon balls."

"I see… Thank you for telling me. Then I'll have to say goodbye for now." Haru said bye as he flew up

"Come back when you have time!" Panchy said nonchalantly as she laughed

Haru just smiled at her and waved his hands and covered his body with ki and flew towards the ocean

After 3 minutes he reached the ocean and he didn't know which direction the kame house was. According to the story, after Bulma came with Goku to find the dragon balls they went to the kame house and he'll just wait for them there.

He saw a dolphin similar to how Goku saw the dolphin so he approached it and smiled "Excuse me, do you know the direction of the kame house?"

"It's in that direction." The dolphin directed Haru to the kame house with his beak

"Thank you!" Haru said his thanks and flew in the direction pointed by the dolphin.

Haru flew in the direction the dolphin pointed at and not even a few minutes later he saw the island and an old man looking at him.

Haru stopped and hovered in the sky

"Hello." Haru said with a smile

The old man then asked with a worried tone "Who are you? Why are you looking for me?" The old man sensed Haru from miles away. With that enormous power.

"I have no ill intent, I am looking for your disciple, Goku. I want to use the dragon balls for something. In addition, when I arrived here, I didn't know how to suppress and sense ki. Can I trouble you to teach me how?" Haru said as he approached the old man

"Is that so? I thought the crane head who has a grudge towards me sent his strong disciple to kill me." the old man sighed in relief

Haru chuckled "How could that old man teach a person of my strength? In terms of teaching, I think you're more capable than that crane head."

The old man looked at me in a bit of shock and asked "How do you know that crane head and his relationship with me?"

Haru chuckled again "You're Muten Roushi right? And that crane head you're talking about I don't even know his name but I know you have a bad relationship with each other."

"You didn't explain how you know our relationship with each other" Muten Roushi scratched his head in confusion

"You can say that I have watched over this multiverse in the heavenly realm in your terms."

"You've watched this multiverse? In the heavenly realm? Are you god?" Muten Roushi asked with a bit of sweat dripping down his head

"Well not exactly the god you're talking about. You're talking about the god in the lookout right? Just think of me as a kind of god that has just now been able to descend in this world." Haru smiled

Muten Roushi just scratched his head and asked "And what did you descend upon this world for, great god…"

Haru chuckled again at Muten Roushi's attitude and just replied "You don't need to be that stiff. Just call me Haru."

"Yes, Lord Haru…" Muten Roushi said

Haru sighed and thought that everybody can't be as casual as Goku. "Anyway, can you teach me that thing you do, the ki sensing thing."

"Of course, I can." Muten Roushi said full of confidence and explained "You know that all people have ki in their bodies right? The theory behind ki sensing other people's ki is just like sensing the ki in your body but in other people's body."

"Yeah? And how do I do that? I get how I sense the ki in my body, but not in other people's body unless I physically touch them."

"Hmmmm… The simplest explanation would be connecting your ki to the rest of the world but not in a physical sense but in terms of ki." Muten Roushi explained vaguely but Haru got it

"I see…" Haru closed his eyes and felt his ki. He felt ki that was foreign to his body but it wasn't as dense as his people's ki so he ignored it as it was faint but as he connected his ki to the ki of the surrounding he was able to sense it slightly. Although his ki was contained in his body it was slightly opened just like Whis said in the god state they have to contain the ki in their bodies. Which was impossible for him right now as he couldn't do it.

He was able to sense Muten Roushi as his ki was quite big in terms of quality unlike the surrounding ki "I got it!" Haru said as he opened his eyes

Muten Roushi looked at Haru in disbelief as he felt him connecting his ki to the surrounding ki and was able to do it in his first try "A-As expected of Lord Haru. Worthy of being a god."

Haru chuckled and said "Goku and his friends should be arriving here soon. I sensed them from far away. Earthlings don't have ki like Goku."

Muten Roushi was even more shocked as he couldn't sense Goku at all but wondered why Goku was discerned as not like an Earthling "Is Goku's ki unique? I only sense that Goku has good ki, not anything else."

Haru just smiled and said "You'll know in time."

Muten Roushi nodded.

Not far away from them the flying nimbus flew in their direction with an aircraft on his left

"Osu! Jii-chan!" Goku greeted Muten Roushi as he went down his flying cloud and stood on the sand

Goku looked at Haru who was smiling at him and asked "Who are you?"

Muten Roushi sweated and immediately smacked him in the head "Goku! This is a god that has descended! Be more respectful!"

"Ouch!" Goku cried in pain as he looked at Haru and said "Good Afternoon… My name is Son Goku…"

Haru chuckled and said "I'm Haru. Nice to meet you, Goku. Don't mind the old man and just treat me as an older brother."

Goku nodded with a bit of tears from his eyes from Muten Roushi's smack

Bulma also descended the aircraft with Krillin and Bulma was star struck as she looked at Haru "W-Who is this handsome man?"

Haru just smiled at her and put forward his hand. "I'm Haru. Nice to meet you, Bulma."

Bulma shook his hand as she looked at him as if she was in love "I'm Bulma…"

Krillin just looked at Haru as he held the diamond they found in the pirate's treasure.

Haru looked at Krillin and smiled and just said "You can just treat me as an older brother too. Krillin."

Krillin also nodded just like Goku but he wondered why but they just met and he knows their name. He also wondered how he was god as he heard Muten Roushi say he was a god.

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