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Finishing My Unfinished Dimension

I received an email from the God of Writing to finish an unfinished dimension, I thought it was some kind of scam but I clicked it anyway and was transported into my fan-fic world. Although I couldn't control the changes anymore, I'll control the change as a character in the fan-fic myself. Finishing my Unfinished Dimension(A Better Goku) by going into the dimension myself. Chapter Release rate: When I have a chapter finished, I'll publish right away. Picture Link: https://www,pinterest,ph/pin/148900331416809059/

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Leaving the Hyperbolic Time Chamber

Chapter 12 - Leaving the Hyperbolic Time Chamber

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After a week Trunks got used to playing with his ki turning it sword in a second and a lance in the next

Haru just smiled and said "Let's proceed to the next training." Haru snapped his finger just for cool effect and changed Trunks gravity by x100

Trunks frowned as he felt the gravity get multiplied around him and struggled to stay standing up but persevered with a look similar to his father as if trying to kill someone by just glaring

Haru clapped and purposely made his voice loud "Now, you seem more like Vegeta's son!"

Vegeta who looked their way just snorted and continued with his training. Haru appeared in front of Vegeta who was punching the air and was about to collide to Haru's face which caused him to smirk but didn't stop his punch but Haru just disappeared like an after image backwards and caught his punch with his palm "Now, now, Vegeta. You could have stopped your punch but why didn't you?"

Vegeta was surprised at how Haru suddenly teleported backwards by a step but replied as he pulled his arm back "Why should I?"

Haru just sighed and teleported in front of Vegeta with a motion to flick the forehead again. "Pride is good and all but antagonizing a really really really really strong person well… god like me is not even recklessness and just plain stupid." Haru was about to send him flying with a flick again but Vegeta tried to form a ki shield in front of his forehead. Haru chuckled but still sent him flying destroying the ki shield protecting his forehead.

Vegeta just tried to stop after he was sent flying and didn't scream in pain this time and clicked his tongue as he felt pain in his forehead "tsk".

Haru clapped his hands to teasingly praise Vegeta "You've officially become my disciple."

"What? When did that happen? I don't recall asking you to teach me."

"What do you mean? I allowed you to watch as I taught Trunks."

"Tsk!"

"Alright! I'll spar with you. Come at me." Haru taunted as he snapped his finger as he changed Vegeta's gravity by x100. "You can't become super saiyan."

Vegeta knew that increasing base power was the way to become stronger as a saiyan best so he just smirked as he took his fighting stance "Don't blame me if I become stronger than you."

Haru just shrugged and teased "Don't worry. That's impossible."

Vegeta snorted in reply as he didn't believe Haru was that strong and rushed towards Haru and tried to punch and kick him in the face as he slowly moved forward during his chain of attacks. Haru just dodged like he was playing with Vegeta "Ah… Vegeta-chan… Try harder, okay?"

Vegeta's forehead formed a vein but his pride won't allow him to use weapons such as how he taught Trunks, Goku, and Raditz so he always used raw power like ki blasts, physical fitness, and basic ki technique like using ki as a shield in certain spots.

"Let's see…" Haru said as he just stood up and let Vegeta hit him only for Vegeta to discover Haru defending the same way as he did before. As Vegeta's fist was about to hit Haru in the head his fists suspended in mid air as a formation of ki caught his fist. Vegeta took back his hand and tried to punch and kick Haru all over the body to discover Haru used ki in certain spots to block his attacks.

Haru just sighed in disappointment as he teased Vegeta "Is this your best?"

Vegeta was aggravated by how Haru mocked him so he turned super saiyan and a burst of golden ki bursted up out in the surrounding.

Haru snapped his finger and changed Vegeta's gravity to x5000 to make it as if he was in base form "Tsk, tsk, tsk. I told you, you can't become a super saiyan."

Vegeta just ignored the change and still dashed towards Haru and continued his chain of attacks, occasionally sending ki blasts that exploded and sometimes ki blasts that focused more in penetrating power.

Haru just dodged everything Vegeta throwed that irritated Vegeta so much "Haru advised, " You're too slow your battle instinct and battle iq is not in sync with your instinct."

"Alright! I'll force you to become my disciple." Haru said as he smiled towards Vegeta

Vegeta just snorted and replied "You can try, but you won't be able to."

"Really?" Haru asked as he continued "I'll show you 0.0000000001% of my power."

(A/N: 1,000,000,000,000]

Vegeta just looked at Haru in ridicule as he felt Haru wasn't that much stronger than him.

Haru released Vegeta from his gravity and used his god ki's momentum to pressure Vegeta.

Vegeta looked at Haru in dread that although he couldn't sense his aura, his body was forced to not be able to move.

Haru pointed his index finger towards Vegeta and requested as he smiled gently "Try not to die. Vegeta."

In Vegeta's point of view as he was pressured with Haru's aura, Haru's gentle smile was more akin to that of a demon instead of a really kind person.

Haru flicked his index finger and sent a fast shockwave towards his forehead that sent him flying for miles "Gruahhhhhhhhhhh!" Vegeta screamed in pain as his body was sent flying and was thrown away like a wet rag.

Vegeta was sent flying for hundreds of miles before he finally stopped being thrown away with his body injured all over the place. He couldn't help but think although his body was twitching from pain and couldn't move and was about to lose consciousness 'That was 0.0000000001% of his power? That's just ridiculous!"

Haru clapped and retrieved Vegeta's body with his ki and all his injuries already healed as he appeared in front of him.

Haru praised with a gentle smile and suppressed his god ki "That was great, Vegeta, you didn't die."

Vegeta just looked at Haru with a pale face and thought 'He's really strong, I didn't even notice how he retrieved and healed my body in that instant.'

"So? Wanna be forced to become my disciple or let your extremely high pride get in the way?" Haru asked

Vegeta just nodded as his pride was dragged into the depths of hell in that instant he was sent flying.

Haru treated Vegeta like a kid and patted his head "great, great. Now we can start training properly"

Vegeta didn't react despite being treated like a kid. Although he was extremely vexed, he knew this person will bring him to heights that he has no hope of reaching if he just relied on himself.

Vegeta clenched his fist in excitement imagining this.

Haru just chuckled when he saw Vegeta's excitement

1 year later, the training ended Vegeta's base power level rose to [Power Level: 126,861,512], and Trunks to [Power Level: 119,361,213]

Haru looked at them in satisfaction although they didn't yet know how to go full power super saiyan, Haru will let them figure it out themselves.

"Alright, time to come out." Haru announced as he clapped his hands

Haru just made a circular motion with his index finger and enhanced it with ki to cut out a part of the dimension and finally saw the outside world, the floor to the lookout.

In the lookout, Goku and Gohan frowned at the ridiculous amount of ki they sensed from the cut in dimension. They sensed Trunks and Vegeta.

Goku looked at the cut in dimension and saw Haru smiling and waving his hands.

"Haru-niisan! You're finally coming out!" Goku said in excitement as he saw Haru

Bulma also looked with excitement as he heard Goku call Haru's name. "Haru? Where?"

Gohan looked at Goku in surprise as he asked "Haru-niisan?"

"Yup! I'm finished with training and… I'm sick of sleeping. I slept for a few hundred years."

Gohan looked at Haru in shock as he heard 'A few hundred years?'

Haru just approached Gohan as he smiled "Yup. A few hundred years. I'm immortal."

Gohan nodded in understanding as he heard that looking at this kind looking human

Haru sensed the surroundings of earth and said "It seems like Cell is still in its incomplete form."

Goku replied as his face changed into a dreadful one "That's right… He's become incredibly strong…"

Vegeta who came out of the hyperbolic time chamber laughed like a maniac as he sensed Cell's ki and mocked Goku "He's strong but not quite as strong as me!"

Goku looked at Vegeta and Trunks and said as he smiled in understanding "It seems you both received training from Haru-niisan. But I won't be left behind, I'll get as strong as you after I come out of the hyperbolic time chamber."

Vegeta just snorted in reply as he flew towards Cell and Trunks nodded towards Goku and Gohan and followed Vegeta.

Haru looked at Goku and smiled as he saw Goku was all grown up "You've grown up well, Goku."

Goku smiled and laughed "Yes!"

Haru looked at Bulma who was looking dumbfoundedly, and approached to pat Trunks head "Grow up well, my future disciple."

"H-Haru?" Bulma asked in surprise as Haru felt different

Haru chuckled and replied "Yup!"

"B-But… Why is your hair white?"

"It's part of officially becoming a god." Haru explained as he laughed lightly

"I-Is that so… But what do you mean future disciple?" Bulma asked as he looked at the more godly kind of aura, Haru.

"This kid will become one of my disciples in the future." Haru replied

"I see…" Bulma just nodded

"Alright, Goku and Gohan go to the time chamber now after you finish changing clothes."

"Yes!" Goku replied as he brought Gohan to change into saiyan training clothes.

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(A/N: I have some things to do for a week so I can only release about 1 or 2 chapters a day. Leave Power Stones if you like the story. Thank you!)