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Finishing My Unfinished Dimension

I received an email from the God of Writing to finish an unfinished dimension, I thought it was some kind of scam but I clicked it anyway and was transported into my fan-fic world. Although I couldn't control the changes anymore, I'll control the change as a character in the fan-fic myself. Finishing my Unfinished Dimension(A Better Goku) by going into the dimension myself. Chapter Release rate: When I have a chapter finished, I'll publish right away. Picture Link: https://www,pinterest,ph/pin/148900331416809059/

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End of Training

Chapter 10 - End of Training

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Raditz sat for 30 minutes and found it difficult to not move for such a long time so he moved a bit and opened his eyes to receive a hit in the face from Haru's stick that was made of ki that sent him flying and screaming "Ahhhhh!"

Haru sighed in disappointment and said "I told you not to move."

Raditz just swallowed the anger he felt and continued to meditate. That earned a nod of approval from Haru "If you keep that up for a month. I'll make you stronger than Vegeta."

Raditz opened his eyes and looked at Haru in expectation and asked "Really?!"

Haru hit him again in the face, which sent him flying to the other side "I told you not to move."

Raditz in excitement didn't care about the pain and just sat down again this time he stayed put for 5 hours.

"Alright. That's enough, it's time to eat." Haru said as he clapped his hands to signal to stop

Raditz opened his eyes and found that he was really calm not like the usual where he felt extremely irritated all of the time and just replied "Okay."

Haru looked at Raditz in surprise as he saw his ki and thought 'It was only for 6 hours and he already grasped calmness in ki with his really overbearing ki? Color me surprised. He really is the brother of Goku, he just didn't have the correct teachings. Well… it's probably because of Bardock's wish from dragon ball super that made him super talented alongside his brother.'

Raditz looked at Haru in surprise to find him cooking for him and asked "Why don't you ask me to cook the food? I'm going to eat it anyway."

Haru smiled at the changed Raditz. It's like he swapped places with someone else "It's okay. Just train with my instructions and not worry about these things."

Raditz just nodded and continued to sit at the table, he watched Haru's every movement, because of his now calm attitude he saw that even if he attacked Haru with a sneak attack, he wouldn't be able to deal any damage to him.

He saw Haru cooked the food with ki and his eyes twitched at this sight as he thought 'He's not gonna feed me anything weird right?'

Haru finished cooking instantly which surprised Raditz "Alright eat up!"

Raditz was surprised at the extremely hunger-inducing food. He looked at the food as he drooled

"Don't forget to say 'itadakimasu' before you eat and 'gochisousamadeshita' After you eat."

Raditz didn't know whatever that meant but followed anyway "Itadakimasu" and started to devour the food. His eyes shined at the extremely flavourful food and started devouring even more.

Haru thought in amusement as he saw this '5 kg like the kid Goku will probably not be enough for him so let's make 10 kg of food.'

Haru started making lots of food for Raditz to eat and as he finished he floated in the air and meditated in the white space.

After 30 minutes he heard someone say "Gochisousamadeshita" and smiled at this notion that Raditz was following his instructions.

"Alright, start meditating" Haru instructed as he felt Raditz coming out of the mansion in the hyperbolic time chamber.

Raditz was surprised but not really and started meditating.

This went on for a month until Raditz could meditate for 12 hours straight.

Haru created a couch made out of ki and sat down like a boss and asked Raditz who finished meditating "Do you know the difference between before and after I made you meditate?"

Raditz nodded as he calmly answered "The state of the energy inside my body is now like a flowing river instead a stormy rain"

Haru then smiled as he praised "Great. You're more talented than your brother in terms of ki, if I must say."

"Ki?" Raditz asked

"The energy inside your body is termed ki."

"I see…" Raditz said as he was educated

"Do you know now why Goku suppresses his ki and releases it all when he fights?"

Raditz nodded and replied "Yes. He puts the state of the ki in like a sleeping state and awakened state for it to be more potent as he fights."

Haru nodded and praised "Great job figuring that out. Now can you sense all the ki in your body?"

"Yes. I felt it when I was meditating."

"You're really talented. Are you sure you're not Goku in disguise?" Haru laughed attempting to make fun of Raditz

Raditz just stood there not reacting at all forgetting his arrogant and irritated nature.

Haru then sighed and said "You're no fun. Alright. Let's get on with the next training which is ki control."

Haru demonstrated using ki transforming it into different types of weapons and density

"When you can do this. You can be considered quite a ki master" Haru said as he stood up and meditated in the air again "I'll leave the food on the table at every lunch and dinner time. You can train on your own."

Raditz just nodded and tried forming ki weapons just like what Haru thought but found it much more difficult than how Haru easily showed it and found out it consumed a whole lot of ki to form a weapon. Haru formed lots of weapons with ki to show him the way and wondered just how much ki does Haru have. Raditz just shrugged this thought and continued with his training.

After 5 months he could do it easily as he got used to it so he tried to use it as a tool to attack. But his favorite one was a hammer.

Haru who saw Raditz just smiled and approached him "It's been six months and you've trained quite well. I'll spar with you to increase your power. Come at me."

Raditz, who was surprised at Haru's sudden teachings, got excited and said "I won't hold back. Haru-san!"

Haru just looked at Raditz with one eye and smiled "Well… try your best."

Raditz flew towards him with his favourite weapon, the hammer and slammed it as he jumped up to build up momentum

Haru just dodged a bit to the right and poked Raditz with a finger in the face "Too slow. Are you trying to give your opponents an opening to kill you?"

Raditz just nodded and swung his hammer towards the side which Haru dodged by jumping up and behind Raditz

Haru kicked Raditz behind a bit and sent him flying, unlike Goku, Raditz didn't scream and just looked at Haru in vigilance.

Haru chuckled and taunted with his finger for Raditz to come

Raditz nodded and transformed his hammer into 2 swords in each hand. He first slashed downwards with his left sword and saw Haru dodge to the side so he rotated his body backwards and sliced horizontally with his right sword.

Haru collided with the sword with his finger and asked "How are you so good at fighting? I'm surprised"

Raditz just shrugged and replied "Just discovered it." Haru just chuckeled at this reply which got a response from Raditz a ki blade from his feet that slashed upwards

Haru just dodged by backflipping.

Haru who standing far away just looked at Raditz and raised his finger "Try not to die Raditz."

Raditz looked at Haru in vigilance as he sensed a ki forming at Haru's finger that rushed towards him. Of course Haru made the ki he sent as a mortal ki so Raditz could sense. As it approached him it turned into a lot of homing ki blasts, maybe more of a ki blade than blast.

Raditz dodged a few and collided his ki swords with some as he couldn't dodge, 'such a heavy ki' Raditz thought as he collided with the ki blades that was sent his way.

Haru just smiled at Raditz who was talented and sent a more ki blades for an hour from all over the direction.

After an hour Raditz who constantly dodging and hitting the ki blades breathed heavily "Huff… huff… huff…"

"Alright that's enough for today." Haru said as he dispersed all the ki in the surround

Raditz looked at Haru tiredly and replied in difficulty "Huff… yes… Huff…"

This went on for the next 6 months and Raditz could do it easily for hours and not get tired. His power level? [Power Level: 853,132]

"Alright! It's been a year. It's time for you to go out." Haru said as he dispersed his ki blades

Raditz also dispersed his ki weapons and said as he looked towards Haru "Thank you for your teachings. Haru-sensei!"

"Sensei? Well… Let's leave it at that. Have fun outside." Haru laughed at Raditz attitude that was vastly different from a year ago.

Raditz nodded as he smiled without his arrogant demeanor and went through the door.

After the door closes Haru looked at his power level [1,753,866,532,620,561,372,168], it didn't increase much still it's better than nothing.

After he reached the 5000 years mark, his ki went to a qualitative change into god ki base. There is no mortal qi base. He officially stepped into godhood without needing to transform. [Power Level: 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000]

[Age: 766]

His power level is all 0's? He couldn't increase it no matter what he did so he just slept for a few hundred years until Trunks and Vegeta came in. Then he'll come out.

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(A/N: Leave Power Stones if you like the story. Thank you!)