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Good and Evil are two sides of the same coin. Ones act of Kindness to someone might be an act of cruelty to another. ------ Ater found himself in a Novel where the protagonist destroys the world. A ray of light shines upon Ater as he gets an ability that lets him enter novel. He is able to come back with skills and items from the novels.  Ruber had just finished his High School and he found himself inside a game where the world is destroyed by the MC. Ruber gets a cheat system that gives him missions and can get EXP to level up.  Ater and Ruber met and became friends and form the Black Heart and Red Fox Duo which enters novels to get skills and able to level up. The two need to get stronger in order to kill a regressor. -------- What would happen to the Novel Worlds they left? Will they be strong enough to kill a Regressor? Will they be able to keep their friendship forever? ------ The MCs might seem playful and be able to outsmart opponents around the first 30 chapters.(maybe to much) Well read until chapter 30 chapters when things starts to shift. ----- (Warning please prepare yourself for laughing and cries.) (there is involment of gore scenes) (The first 30chapters are long as they have talk most of world view) So give it a try before setting it aside ------ (I am not really an English Native so there might be a lot of errors in the first 15 chapters.) ------ I made this Novel out of my Love for [I Will Kill The Author] by [Night_Crawler619]. Most things might look similar.  I even thought of naming it [We Will Kill The Protagonist]

Yi_Zaha · Fantasie
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40 Chs

INVISIBLE HANDS

-----[ATER POV]-----

I looked at Ziet who was sipping tea, I patted Nier and asked him, 

"For what reason would the Vice Principal visit me at this hour?"

Ziet sipped his tea and looked around the place, he kept a straight face and finally opened his mouth,

"Ater Heart for someone who lost his parents your house looks organized and its clean, but tell me something why are you in a science class, your record said you were a top commertial student?"

"Well its a matter of trying to understand the depth of humanity Science does talk about the human body more than any Major.

I know its pretty much useless trying to understand one another but one human can affect another human in both positive and a nagative manner."

Master Ziet looked at me as his eyes showed no emotion and asked, 

"What are you getting at?"

I smiled and asked, "Do you know about the concept of the 'Invisible hand'?" I continued before he said anything,

"I am just a selfish kinda guy, with out me your classes will be boring, I want to create mischief for my own gain, but your students are actually paying more atention to class so that they don't be like me."

The Vice Principal sipped his tea and showed a slight rare smile before saying,

 "Crazy Kid"

"Thank you, all my Masters are Crazy in someway." 

I said as Nier finished the bowl of berries and she went inside it and acted like the bowl was her nest.

Ziet eyes changed colour as they went blood shot red and he crushed the cup he was holding into fine particles of dust and the pressure in the house increased as a few things were falling.

Thanks to the 'Wall' Ability I felt nothing, you could discribe it as someone swimming in an ocean of magma without burning.

I smicked and looked at him and say, 

"You are quite impatient Heptagon,"

He didn't seemed shocked that I knew he was using Ziet as a host and just smicked and said in a high tone,

 "Kid Give me the antidote for the Red Ranger."

"I don't want to."

"YOU"

"First unwritten rule of negations, nothing is for free,"

I just looked at him as he grit his death and he seemed to increase the pressure as some parts of the roof fell down. 

"Listen Hepta just because I don't look threating enough doesn't mean I can't kill you," 

I said as I raised my left index finger which realesed a string of colourless Aether which moved to catch all the falling staff and pick up things on the ground.

I took out a Peacemaker from my inventory, I place the ball and instead of black powder I used 'Burnt Serpent Hemlock' powder which has the same function as black powder but it has a poison effect. 

I cocked the hummer and pointed it at Hepta. The reason I always sleep in class is because I always practice my shooting using magic bullets which will save my bullets and my accuracy is now 45 and even though my stats are still in the upper twenties, I am pretty confident that with a gun in this world I am unbeatable.

"So Hepta are you gonna ask nicely or do you need to be sent to hell, I don't know if there is one for parasites like you."

Hepta's face was almost openning his supressed 12 eyes but he gave control back to Ziet who said, 

"Please Ater"

"Well anything for the Rangers Master, " 

I said as I uncocked the Peacemaker and signal Neir to bring the antidote.

Neir came in a few seconds holding a medical string which was already loaded she gave to Master Ziet and flew back to sleep in the bowl. Master Ziet kept on his straight face as he stood up, 

"Thank you, I will be taking my leave."

I just watched the one armed men move out, I didn't say anything back to him and as soon I saw that he was gone I fell to the ground as my Aether cores in both my Heart and Dantian had run out, the string move ate all of my 27 Aether.

"Hahaha I am good Acter don't you think so Nier?"

Nier raised her head which seemed to show little vein a bit while she was in the bowl,

"tweat tweat tweat"

"Ishi okay I won't disturb your sweet sleep,"

What I gave the guy was not an antidote by a temporary agent that would stop the poison. When Hepta tries to take over Armson's body he will be killed by the poison.

I am so smart

"Muhahahaha"

----[POV NAR]----

Armson showed up at school and he now had changed from his arrogant behavior. The time Armson spent paralysed maybe only two days on the outside but for him it felt like a life time and he didn't want to experience that again any normal person could go crazy.

He knew that Ater Heart was the one who poisoned him and not the Alien as his teammates told him. The Red Ranger now was planning his revenge on Ater, he didn't want to fight him as he would be poisoned by Ater if he became reckless.

 It was not that he was weak when he lost to Ater at first but it was because he used the power of a regular teen to fight him.

The first thing the Red Ranger did was ask Carla the Black Ranger to be his second girlfriend. Carla agreed instantly and he told her to never talk to Ater if she wanted their relationship to work out, which she agreed.

Now Armson was sitting infront of the class while his two women Carla and Ashley leaned on his from the right respectively. 

Charline and Gerald who were sitted behind them could tell that something was wrong with the Red Ranger. 

Even though they are book worms and knew nothing about love, they could tell that Armspn was being idiotic. Godfrey being an idiot he was would always praise Armson.

Armson didn't wait long as he long as he saw a boy wearing a complete white treck suit, sneekers, an average body type, dark blue hair, an earring with a cross on his left ear and to Armson he had an ugly face even though it was average. 

The boy was Ater Heart who seemed to be sweating a bit as he woke up late and had to run to collage. Armson smiled and thought to himself,

 'I will make you fell despair Ater Heart'

When Ater looked at them Armson hold Carla's chin as he started French kissing her, and the whole class moved eyes to them and to Ater. 

Ater was shocked at the sight of the Rangers kissing infront of him. Charline and Gerald gave him a sad look and Godfrey seemed to be laughing at Ater for getting his girl snached from him.

Ater walked to his sit which was at the back of the class, his steps where slow showing the pain in his heart.

 Neir come and sat on his shoulder and didn't say anything as her Master was a bit down.

Ater looked at system messages that only he could see, but this time there weren't blue but were red,

[THE STORY IS TAKING A DIFFIRENT TURN FROM THE ORIGNAL.

DECELERATING PLOT TO 0%

THE FINAL BATTLE BETWEEN THE POWER RANGERS AND ALIEN KING WILL HAPPEN IN THE NEXT 100 YEARS

RESULT - FAIL 

ALL STATES GAINED WILL BE LOST AND THE LOG OUT FUNCTION IS NOW AVAILABLE]

Ater sat in his sit and put his hand inside his pocket and burned a rose he wanted to give to Carla with [Ignition] magic. 

He looked at the Kissing Rangers and put his head on the table and say as tears rained down his cheeks,

"I guese having a herem is a no for me, I will only love my fiance Elena from now out. Carla please be happy."

He lifted his teary face and looked at the Rangers and smiled before shouting,

"LOG OUT!"

As soon as Ater said that a blinding light come out and took him and Nier and in a second he was gone. The whole class looked at where Ater was sitted,

"Where did he go,"

"What was that light,"

This made Carla and Armson stop kissing and looked at the direction after a few seconds a white book showed up from his position and flooted to the sky, everybody could see the words written in black on the book.

"وراء البوابة "

Charline and Gerald being book worms knew want was written on the book and said at the same time,

 "Beyond the gate"

The book openned and a countless invisible hands came from it, no one could see them but they could fill it when the hands grabbed them. 

The hands started by grabbing everyone in the Class even the Rangers and would leave anything they touch to nothingness.

The hands moved across the world in a fast manner and ended sending everyone in the world into nothing even the Alien King inside Zeit wasn't spared, and together the Aliens in space were turned to nothing. 

The hands covered the world and turned into nothing before going back in the book. The white book vanished.