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Awakening the Ancient System

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What is Awakening the Ancient System

Lesen Sie den Roman Awakening the Ancient System des Autors DaoistHolySwitch, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.This novel is completely for those who desire MC that are super-strong without necessary cultivating to attain supreme level in their dao path of cultivation.[Enlisted into the Fantasy Carnival entry...

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This novel is completely for those who desire MC that are super-strong without necessary cultivating to attain supreme level in their dao path of cultivation. [Enlisted into the Fantasy Carnival entry] please your vote, critics and reviews would be appreciated

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Sypnosis/Prologue She was born to a half-witch mother and an archmage father therefore she was blessed with a lot of mana In her body. When she was 8 years old, her family was killed by unknown people and she was the only one who survived, she was enraged by her parents' death so she decided to take revenge on them. "Mom, Dad, Sister. I will avenge your death no matter what." One day while she was practicing magic and swords, she discovered that she had the most powerful magic, however even though she had a lot of mana, she would always get exhausted when using her magical power. And to live without starving she became the youngest assassin, the people of the Lavastian empire ordered her to kill all the traitors, and steal 5 gold every week. And one day the duke and the duchess Flowell changed her life from stealing and killing when they decided to adopt her as their daughter because the duchess could not bear a child. After 4 years with her new family, the happy family split up. They died In a carriage accident but their bodies were not identified, and the emperor ordered them to investigate their deaths. Within a few weeks, there was news that they had been killed by bandits. As her rage resurfaced at the news of her family's death and because of the one who killed them, she decided to take revenge on them. After two months, She went back to killing people and was called the "Dark killer" in the Cevallos empire because she was always wearing a black mask and a black cloak whenever she was on a mission. While she's finding the murderer of her new family and her original family, she was surrounded by the love of the male leads. " As I thought, this world I was living In was a world fantasy romance novel." when she met one of the male leads she suddenly remembers her previous life in the novel that she read on her past life before she was reincarnated. And the fact that she only remembers her past life when she met one of the male leads is the start of the novel called 'Flattering Blossom Fantasy Romance'. Alternative titles/ "I'm just a extra character, so why are these male leads are obsessed with someone like me?!" "An extra character became a villainess" My sypnosis isn't official yet, i still find some things to shortened it.

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Justin_Gabventure
Justin_GabventureLv13Justin_Gabventure

I like the book, it's interesting and easy going. I must say, the author has put much effort in the plot of this work, I like this book and I highly recommend this book to whosoever is reading this

SolomonCliff
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Demons_and_I
Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

I'll give you the 5 stars when you edit the first chapter to a point where it's readable and when you post a second chapter. Just DM me on Discord and I'll do it immediately 😁👍

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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DaoistHolySwitch
DaoistHolySwitchAutorDaoistHolySwitch

This my beginning but not the end, tryna make sure u receive the best i can offer guys read and make your reviews. I'm here always to receive your critics and know one which could be of a help

Janjao
JanjaoLv1Janjao

The way you wrote at the beginning was really enjoyable. However, after that, I just sort of zoned out a bit. As a non-native, I'm kind of overwhelmed. The fact that I don't read much doesn't help me in this situation at all. But I can see that you did give it some thoughts Story development i don't see yet (or i zoned out and did not notice im very sorry if i did) I'll give you four and more. Keep up the good work

Aug_ust15
Aug_ust15Lv2Aug_ust15

Woah😍😍😍 this is a beautiful piece of art. The novel is wonderful, with detailed explanation and everything just makes it eye-catching. Keep it coming 👍👍

Twin_Lantern
Twin_LanternLv3Twin_Lantern

Its quite good and I'm curious about the main character. The first chapter is too long if you ask me, with so much info it looks a bit oversaturated but I'm confident it will be better after editing.

Anniasa_Uchiha
Anniasa_UchihaLv1Anniasa_Uchiha

I love this story it is a good and I want more to this story. I love how everyone is acting together. I would recommend this story to anyone. [img=recommend] keep on writing

Parnellis
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The writing quality is very satisfactory, the usage of words are exceptional although quite a number of them seems to be gramatically incorrect. The stability of updates is considerably slow for a second chapter that only lasts a few hundred words, but we'll have to see. It's the Story Development that I can't comment on, I have yet to see an actual development but there has only been 2 chapters published so far, so once again, we'll have to see. The Character Design is very generic, nothing too special. There has been a minimal amount of character interactions both between the characters to reader and a character to another character. World Background is not yet to be described in detail, the only thing I've seen so far is that it just seems like a modern setting.

ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsuLv2ShadowAmeratsu

The writing quality could use a bit of work, but it has a great concept behind it. With a bit of editing, it could get 5 stars, easily. It has good characters and a nice plot, so I'm hoping to see more of this :)

Darkness_Descends
Darkness_DescendsLv3Darkness_Descends

A good read and a well worded novel with great grammar, systems seems to be theme but this is quite unique, hoping to see more chapters as I have great aspiration for this novel

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