Item: Awakening the Ancient System
Rating: 3
Author: SolomonCliff

SolomonCliffLv12yr

2023-01-04 02:33

Honestly, the general idea of the novel is not too bad if you can get over the not too perfect grammar and sentence structure, but to many it'll be a turnoff. The story is about a young man, rather a teenager, Duamu, who already reached the top of power and is fed up with it. He has no interest in cultivating anymore and now just wants some quiet time alone for himself, which for someone who is already known as the strongest, is kind of difficult. Forsaking his teachers and teachings for some fun, to the ire of many. Anyway, if you want a story which seems to go in a more chill direction with a cultivation background, this is the story for you.

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DaoistHolySwitchAuthor

thanks for that

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