1/2 The first day version 0.1

[Year 1709 of the great voyage]

(narrator please read the prologues) and this chapter is not edited yet, and the reason is this chapter not finished yet. originally this supposed to have 2420 word or 3624 but the writer is too busy to write this story... now the writer focus on writing the prologues and world building 

[Narrator] the writer is updating the prologues daily, until the writer feel like it have enough world development... than it will stop

[Time 04:56:13 PM Year 1709 of 2+YAD Day 11 of month 8]

[5 Hour before The Defeat ]

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[let me introduce myself I'm the Narrator my job here is to explain the layout of the location and the character details and the world back story]

okay let me explain the location then

We currently in the Dock 7 it mainly built experimental ship

like other Dock it only built it own type of ship and repair or service experimental ship'

in city of Dover there are 6 other Dock like dock 7

Here I will a list all of the 6 other Dock and what they built

Dock 1 it mainly built Super Heavy Battleship displacement

100.000 or 80.000 ton and armament from 560mm to 460mm carrying 12 Gun on board

Dock 2 it mainly built Battleship displacement 70.000 or 50.000 ton and armament from 440mm to 420mm

carrying 12 to 9 Gun on board

Dock 3 it mainly built BattleCruisers displacement 40.000 to 30.000 armament from 410mm to 380mm carrying 8 Gun on board

Dock 4 it mainly built Heavy Cruisers to Cruisers or Light Cruisers displacement 25.000 to 15.000 ton armament 360mm to 210mm carrying 12 to 8 Gun on board

Dock 5 it mainly built Heavy Aircraft Carriers or light Aircraft Carriers displacement 60.000 to 16.000 ton Carrying capacity is 100 to 28 aircraft on board

Dock 6 it mainly built Destroyer or frigates or corvettes or submarines displacement 10.000 to 2.000 ton armament 180mm to 122mm carrying 10 to 6 Gun on board

note most this is not important after chapter 3... only Dock 7 is active the story

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[The Narrator say out loud ]

(ohhhhhh Finally done I gonna ask for more money for this) [The author thought] there more my friends

{Silently approaching from behind The Narrator} and start raising two hands up high, and put them around the narrator head...

[the Narrator].... {F}

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(note experimental ship is a class of ship that can not be classified as any other ship) it like the ship that will be unveil soon

the city of Dover

it Housing over 150.000 people

The city of Dover is built on a flowing island

the island which the city is built up on is far smaller than it now you may ask how do the people manage to live on that small island

in this world they are a lot of iron and steel on the sea floor so the people here use Metal and steel to build their homes and expand the island we don't know why they are so much iron on the sea floor but the rumor says The iron and steel is the remains of the people of the old world

the city have 12 District and the dock 7 is belonged to District 11 and it on the west side of the city

city of dover is a medium city it belonged to The Holy Temple of Mercury

The city of dover had it own government The temple only intervened in some manner but The rest is belonged to the people

in this world the planet is full of water so it people live on flowing islands

along time ago this world involved itself in to a war' that no one thought It can evolve in to a... but The story has been lost to time only The Roland will know the rest of the story

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The sound of a Busy ship yard go too the air

as a black car go by the main gate of the ship yard in that car they are 3 person a Middle age man with a Golden hair who is the driver and a young man with a Ashen color hair who are sitting at the back a with a black middle aged woman sitting on his side The ranks on all of them say they are in the army most likely the navy

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The summer heat is killings me man

say the man with the golden hair

say the black woman shut up Jacob I heard you complaining for 2 hours straight about your freaking love life and I DON'T WANT TO HEAR YOU SAY ANYTHING MORE if you don't want me to kick your sorry ass off my ship so shut up

[Jacob] what no no no I don't want that okay okay come down rebecca I know you are a angry about the higher up Decision but I know you are worried about your son but he already a strong young man

plus he is a natural born naval officers and getting call to service by the temple as a Naval knight you know how good that is yes?

[Rebecca] yes I know but you see them before remember? those weirdos

[Jacob] what ohhhhhh you mean that time when they go to the streets and Yelling' her goddess is bless us with this knowledge' and make those weird rule back then?

[Rebecca] yes so you remember that

[Jacob] yeah???

[Roland] mom I'm already a functional adult so don't have to worry about me mom,

I already see the ship she is a beautiful want and she maybe a experimental model,

and she had some Horrible story like when she had a Ammo Detonation and 2/3 of her crew die but they say she is okay now,

plus they say that I already become a Paladin so they will modernize her to the newest experimental version

[Rebecca] that is why I'm worry about you Roland, You are so naive and your happy go luck personally of your make me worry and you should just work as a office officers, plus your body is very weak as is it,

wait what do you just say now about you already become a Paladin knight?

[Roland] umm nothing I say nothing (intently sweating)

[Rebecca] Roland explain it to me right now,

[Jacob] hey we about to reach to our...

[Rebecca] shut up I'm talking to my son, Roland? please explain to your mother

[Roland] umm mom please don't be angry

when I go back from school I see a temple knight approaching me

[the knight] said hey are you Roland

[Roland] yes I'm what do you need me for sir knight?

"brightly smile at the knight"

the knight is in shock for a second or two

[knight] (Internal dialog why is a boy had Such a beautiful smile wait is he a boy or a girl)

oh sorry for my manners Roland yes?

[Roland] yeah? so sir knight do you need any help from me?

[knight] no I'm only here just to ask you to go with me to the temple for some matter

[Roland] oh my is my dad calling me? I thought he was ban from meeting me for 2 year,

wait maybe it already 2 year had pass and I lost my memory so that why my body feel so weird

[knight] :hold up wait a minute: yes his highness want to meet you and the ban still there and 2 year have not pass "the dumbfounded lay in his voice"

[Roland] so I go to meet dad and he asks me if I want any birthday present I hear from my friends about a experimental ship so said to dad I want a ship, and he gives the order to the ship yard to get me a ship and modernized it

[Rebecca] I thought it was for you winning the academy tournament'

so you been lying to your mom and now you are on your dad side, and how many time do I have to tell you to stay as far away from the temple as possible

[Roland] no no no mom I'm not lying to you the winning part is a coincident

plus dad tell me to keep this a secret from you for a while, and when you find out I have to tell you something

[Roland dad] said please forgive me Rebecca but you had to be careful about something. it very dangerous and it coming very soon

[Roland] so that is why dad give me the ship and a Destroyer a escort it from my tournament

[Rebecca] what do you mean by something is coming? and why do I have to be careful about something :The confusion lay in her voice:

[Roland] I don't know what dad means by that but he seem to be worry about something,

[Jacob] hey we are here you guy

[Roland] what we already

[Rebecca] "turn her head to look at the ship", she is a good looking ship and a well armed want too

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here are the plans and name for the next 4 chapter

the first day 2/2.

the fall of Dover.

the escape from Dover.

the first maiden voyage.

the prologue, it tell the history of this world call Oseedekar and the great being Call Tbotfl

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(NOTES everything are subject to change in the future)

I'm currently working on a new version of this chapter.

English is not my first language. the version you currently seeing is a very old it over 3 months old I became better at writing now, I'm currently working on the prologue

I will take back my words it not finished yet, I still work on the back story of Oseadekar